a little love story - korrigieren

[Soultosqueeze]

Hey,
ein Text von unserem Gitarristen.. er würde ihn gerne korrigieren lassen, aber meine Englischkenntnisse sind auch nicht so überragend, um ihm da 100% weiterhelfen zu können..
Wär nett wenn ihr mal drüberschauen könntet. Danke


if I had to start a new beginnin’
Babe, I’d do it all for you
if I had to do it all over again,
Babe, I love you, that is true
if I had to wait for ten thousand years
Babe, I'd even do that too.
If I had to walk a tousend miles
Our love is nothing new..

Thats all for you
for youuuuu

Micky Mouse got Mini on his side
Daisy Duck was Donals lovely bride
Homer Simpson loves- his Marge too
And this song i worte- is only for you
romeo got his julia till the dead they depart
tragic love storys are very hart
Fred Flintstone got a woman too
Wilma loved him – yabaaa dabba dooo

Thats all for you
for youuuuu

FOR YOUU..FOR YOU
I did it all for you

Love ist Blind
But its not easy to find

Im feeling like I have no controll over my mind
But once is true...

I did it all for you

[FiendishMinx]

If I had to
make a new beginnin’
Babe, I’d do it all for you.

If I had to do it all over again,
Babe, I love you, that is true.
If I had to wait for ten thousand years
Babe, I'd even do that too.
If I had to walk a thousand miles
Our love is nothing new..

That's all for you
for youuuuu

Micky Mouse got Mini on his side
Daisy Duck was Donald's lovely bride
Homer Simpson loves- his Marge too
And this song I wrote - is only for you
Romeo got his Julia until death do they part
Tragic love stories are very hard
Fred Flintstone got a woman too
Wilma loved him – yabaaa dabba dooo

That's all for you
for youuuuu

FOR YOUU..FOR YOU
I did it all for you

Love is blind
But it's not easy to find

I'm feeling like I have no controll over my mind
But once is true... Aber einmal ist es wahr? - Meinst du das hier wirklich?

I did it all for you

[Soultosqueeze]

Danke schonmal..

I'm feeling like I have no controll over my mind
But once is true... Aber einmal ist es wahr? - Meinst du das hier wirklich?

Ich hab ihn mal gefragt, er wollte damit "Aber eines ist wahr"..ausdrücken

[FiendishMinx]

I'm feeling like I don't have control over my mind, but once it'll be true

waere hier moeglich. Klingt aber schraeg...

I'm feeling like I lose my mind but once it's gonna be true

auch ok?