Bitte korrigieren

[Nicky]

Hallo,
wir müssen in Englisch einen Text zu einem Diagramm schreiben der eauch eingesammelt und bewertet wird.
Deshalb wäre es super nett wenn es sich jemand durchlessen und korregieren würde.
Ich brauche ihn bis spätestens Diensatg abend (7.4.).

Vielen Dank schon im Vorraus.


The statistic is about the immigration in the United States. The graph shows the number of legal immigrants per year from 1820 to today. The pier charts show where the immigrants came from in percentage.
In the first 25 years the immigration to the USA increases slowly and then follows a high increase.
In this time the people came predominantly with the sailing ship from Europe. The reason was the famine in Ireland and Britain between 1845 and 1850 and the revolution in Germany. The people hoped to have a better live in the USA. Only 20 % come from Asia and Africa trough the slavery.
Between 1850 and 1900 goes the number of immigrants up and down. The highpoints came trough the revolution in Germany 1848, the foundation of the empire in Germany in the year 1871 and because of the colonization in Africa an Asia and the associated enslavement.
The highest point with over 1100000 immigrants per year was between 1900 and 1910.
The reasons that so much people (85%) came from Europe to the USA was the War in the Balkans Mountain, the feudalisms and the high economical development in the USA. In the next 5 years took the immigration off, because the political and economical situation in Europe calmed down. In the time of the First World War was a decrease but this time followed an increase because of the dictatorship and the revolution in Russia. Trough the world wide economic crisis in 1930 came it to a decrease. After this time the people came with the engine ship and the zeppelin. In the years of the Second World War was not such a high immigration predominantly Jewish people immigrated to the USA. From 1945 to today increase the number of legal immigrants constantly. The people came with different ships and with the airplane predominate from America and Asia. In the year 1990 gave it once more high increase because of the end of the Cold War. The people see in the USA their chance to live the American Dream.
The numbers of immigration depend on the economical and political development of the countries.