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jojo-maus
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Ich soll über die Überschrift "There is too much violence on tv" diskutieren. Bitte helt mir auch wenn ihr den Inhalt oder den Style nicht so gut findet, denn darauf achtet meine Lehrehrin sehr.

4. -There is too much violence on TV-
There are different opinions about this subject. But I think the majority is against the violence on TV. It is dufficult to tell the different between reality and fiction, this would be able to lead to violence on schools. In my mind people will confronted with dangers (gefahren) in all programms and at all times of the day. The problem is that we start to accept it as normal.
On the other hand parents should to watch out for their children (auf die Kinder aufpassen) that they do not look programmes with violence.Usually at night parents are at home and they can manage that there children view programms which are age-based. Besides there are a lot of films which are censored.
Maybe childrens use the TV as a balance to school or for relaxing.
One can see violence does have a negativ effect on people, but there are people they see violence does not have a negative effect.

LG :D




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