essay - Korrekturlesen

[TobbeL]

Hey, ich hoffe jemand hat Zeit und Lust diesen Text mal auf Fehler zu durchforsten.
Vielen Dank schonmal

Last weekend Sharry, Chris and me went to Kijkberg. It´s a tiny skiing area in the Alps between Moscow and Paris.
When we arrived after approximately an hour of driving, the first thing we did was to take a bath in the snow. Then we went to the rental store to get our skiing equipment, which included ski boots, ski sticks and...very important a pair of skis.
After that the only thing that was between us and a hell of fun in the snow, was that damn high mountain, so we decided to buy some tickets for lift usage. The first run was kind of strange, because you´ve to get used to it again. The following runs were quite good, but however I became bored of the easy difficulty and so I decided to
exchange my skis for a snowboard. It was the first time for me standing on a snowboard and the consequence was a lot of pain, but it was also a hell of fun!

Now I´m looking forward to buy my own board in a while!

[Keswick]

Last weekend Sharry, Chris and me went to Kijkberg. It´s a tiny skiing area in the Alps between Moscow and Paris.
When we arrived after approximately an hour of driving, the first thing we did was to take a bath in the snow. Then we went to the rental store to get our skiing equipment, which included ski boots, ski sticks and...very important a pair of skis.
After that the only thing that was between us and a hell of fun in the snow, was that damn high mountain, so we decided to buy some tickets for lift usage. The first run was kind of strange, because you have to get used to it again. The following runs were quite good, but however I became bored of the easy difficulty and so I decided to
exchange my skis for a snowboard. It was the first time I stood on a snowboard and the consequence was a lot of pain, but it was also a hell of fun!

Now I´m looking forward to buy my own board in a while!

Das was ich gruen angestrichen habe, habe ich geaendert, weil es in der Art nicht ueblich ist. Entweder "you have to get used to it" oder "you've got to get used t it", wobei das sehr umgangssprachlich ist und ich es in der Form in einem geschriebenen Text nicht verwenden wuerde.

Schoen, dass du einen tollen Urlaub hattest .

[TobbeL]

Hey danke für die schnelle Antwort, hatte es gestern Abend schon gesehen war aber zu faul zum einloggen :S
Jaja immer die alte Leier mit den irregular verbs...hätte ich die doch gut damals in der 5. Klasse gelernt