Stimmt der Satz so?

[galami]

Stimmt der Satz so?


Furthermore I am organizing an event with work shops and a panel discussion both on the subject of the financial crisis.


oder eher:

Furthermore I am organizing an event with work shops and a panel discussion both on the financial crisis.


Besten Gruß
galami

[galami]

Hey, habe von einem Amerikaner grade diese Antwort bekommen:

Furthermore, I am organizing an event regarding the financial crisis that will include both workshops and a panel discussion.



Cool, oder?

Wie würdet ihr's machen?

[Kliapatra]

Furthermore, I am organizing an event regarding the financial crisis that will include both workshops and a panel discussion.

Das hört sich gut. (: