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Nicky
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bitte korriegieren...wichtig!!

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Ich muss einen Vortag zur Religion der Amish halten.
Bin mir aber nicht sicher ob es vom sprachlichen und gramatischen her gesehen richtig ist.
Deshalb wäre es echt super wenn es sich jamand durchschauen könnte.
Brauche es bis Dienstag abend (13.1) zurück!

Im Vorraus schon vielen Dank!!!!

The Amish are a Christian religion community and have their origin in the anabaptist movement of the 16th century.
The Amish divine service takes place every two weeks on Sunday. The divine service is an important Amish solemn action.
That’s why appearance duty is. Should a member of the congregation don’t come than is it that’s why that the member is ill or had an accident.

The divine services were made in the houses of the members from the respective congregation. For the divine services were the houses clean out and benches were furnished. Now something to the congregations: a congregation consist of 20 to 30 families. Which have 2 preachers and 1 deacon. A bishop is responsible for 2 congregations.
The preachers and the bishop were voted with a lot.
The Amish preachers preach in Dutch, that is a blend of German and English. The bible against it is read in German.




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The Amish are a religious community of Christians and
have their origin in the Anabaptist movement of the 16th century.

The Amish divine service takes place every two weeks on Sunday.
The divine service is an important Amish solemn tradition.
That's why appearance is mandatory.
Should a member of the congregation not be present
it is probably for a good reason. He might be
ill or had an accident.
The divine services are held in the houses of the members from the respective congregation.
For the divine services the houses are cleaned out and furnished with benches.

Now I'll talk about the congregations. A congregation consist of 20 to 30 families.
Which has two preachers and one deacon.
A bishop is responsible for two congregations.

The preachers and the bishop are elected by the majority of the members of their congregation.

The Amish preachers preach in Dutch, that is a blend of German and English.
The bible on the other hand is read in German.

furnished = möbliert
furniture = Möbel
bench = Bank

You can find more information at:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Amish
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Nicky
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Vielen Dank für die Hilfe...hat mir wirklich sehr geholfen

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