Kann es jemand korrigieren??

[mfeatm]

1)In former times the earth could handle those pollution problems because there were enough of fresh air, land and water but now things have been changed. The main reason for that is our population and the spread of industry world wide. New waste like plastics destroys our earth more because you cant rot it into the soil. Air is being polluted by the industry and every year 150.000.000 tons of gases, sprays and other chemicals are released into the air. There are two main causes of air pollution and the first one is our traffic like fumes from cars, buses and trucks and the other cause is fumes from industry. The most of our air pollution is caused by motor vehicles. They realease more than 60 per cent of dangerous gases into the air and in large cities are the cars who are responsible for the air pollution, they release more than 80 per cent of dangerous gases.


2)The problems are that we humans or animal breathe such kind of dirty air. It says that breathing the air in New York is like smoking forty cigarettes a day. Air pollution damages our paint, metal, our clothes gets dirty and keeps plants from growing. It can also kill you because it effects your lung. All the garbage you throw away is a damage for our environment. For example the garbage you burn pollutes our air and if u throw something in the water than our water is polluted.
The main problem for us humans are that we cant get out of it. Every where we go, we are followed by the pollution, for example in traffic, swimming pool, parks, garden, shops or in any countryside.


Mein eng ist halt nicht leider so gut..danke wenn es jemand korrigieren könnte!