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Mein Englisch ist eine Katastrophe , ich bin dankbar ...

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Heat and Dustvon Ruth Prawer
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Analyse the encounter between the narrator and Dr. Gopal. Compare their attitudes to the dying beggar as well as the reasons for these attitudes (see: p.92 ut 94)

In the page from 92 to 94 written by Ruth Prawer Ihabrala "Heat and Dust".
As far as the story at hand is concerned on meeting of Dr. Gopal and the main character of the novel. The reader makes the statemants that Dr Gopal present helpful and attentive in opposite of the protagonist.
Hoping has wake up from the narrator by doctors in the first few moments, but furthermore the reader is to be inform quickly, that Dr. Gopal is more interested to learn the English language. as to worry about the wealthy from th eold beggar lady. The protagonist is worried of wealth from the lady who has laid in dying, but likewise Dr. Gopal is calm and unworried about this situation in Great Britain. In India she is shocked with a new realitiy. Dr. Gopal and other doctors have been contronted with such terrific events in Indian hospitals each day.
His hands are bundled because the equipment of the hospital is few.




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Heat and Dust by Ruth Prawer

Analyze the encounter between the narrator and Dr. Gopal.
Compare their attitudes to the dying beggar as well as the reasons for these attitudes (see: p.92 to 94)


Analysis of "Heat and Dust" written by Ruth Prawer Ihabrala (with a focus on page 92 to 94).

As far as the story at hand is concerned you just need to know
that... [inform us a bit].

I'm going to describe / analyze the encounter / meeting of
Dr. Gopal and the main character of the novel. *

The reader makes the statements
that Dr Gopal is presented as helpful and attentive in opposition to the protagonist.**

Hoping has wake up from the narrator by doctors in the first few moments, (?)

Furthermore the reader is quickly informed about Dr. Gopal,
who
is more interested in learning the English language
than worrying about the well being of the old beggar lady.

The protagonist is worried about the well being of the lady who is dying,
but likewise Dr. Gopal is calm and unworried about the situation in Great Britain.

In India she is shocked with a new reality.

Dr. Gopal and other doctors are confronted with such terrific events in Indian hospitals every day.

His treatment options are limited by the insufficient equipment of the hospital.

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on page x - auf Seite x

* Who is the main character (name)?
** The reader doesn't make any statements at all! He is the one reading the book.
Maybe the narrator is stating something?
Who is the protagonist (name)?

You should keep in mind that not everybody has read the book you are talking about!

I'm very sorry to say this, but I think everybody who has read your text would agree
that your English skills are so limited that you should always include a German translation
to give us at least a clue about the things you want to express.
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