24 sentences for correction

[Vany]

Hi, I had to translate 24 sentencen into english. The topic is OFFERS Maybe sombody can look through and correct them. That would be helpful for my correspondence exam at Tuesday. Many thanks... Vanessa

1. We have received your letter dated the 5 of this month. / Thank you for your enquiry of 3 May
2008.
2. We refer to our telephone call of today.
3. We are pleased to submit the following quotation. / Herewith we are offering without engagement.
4. Our prices are quoted CIF New York, seaworthy packing included.
5. Our terms of payment are within 2 weeks with 2 % cash discount.
6. We would ask you to open an urrevocable and confirmed letter of credit in our favour.
7. We offer a 10 % quantity discount for orders over 200 items.
8. Delivery can be effected immediately after receipt of order.
9. As there has been a great demand for this article, the delivery periode is currently about 4 weeks.
10. Unfortunately we are unable to supply the goods you require.
11. In order to facilitate the introduction of our products on your market, we are willing to grant you
a trade discount of 30 %.
12. When comparing our prices with those of our competitors, you will find that ours are more
favourable.
13. As our prices have already been keenly calculated, unfortunately we are unable to reduce them
further.
14. We would like to establish a business relation with your company. / We would be pleased to do
business with you.
15. Our representative Mr Shepard will contact you during his next visit in Hamburg.
16. We have establishes a consignement stock öin Calcutta for being able to deliver replacements
an accesseries at any times.
17. Our abent will be pleased to assist you at any time.
18. As we are willing to establish a market for our products in India, we are prepared to grant you
a discount of 5 % on our list prices.
19. We grant a 2 % cash discount.
20. We hope that our quotation will come up to your expectation.
21. We would be pleased if our terms meet your requirements for submitting an order.
22. We are sure that quality and design will meet the requirements of your customers.
23. We would be pleased to receive your trial order.
24. We assure you that any order placed will be executed with the utmostt care. (punctually and
carefully)