Schule auf einer Homepage vorstellen

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frollein
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Schule auf einer Homepage vorstellen

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Hallo,
eigentlich ist mein Vater wieder da und ich könnte ihn fragen. Aber ich habe beim letzten mal hier nach der schiftlichen Korrektur so viel mehr verstanden, als nach einer halbstündigen Rede von meinem Vater :wink:
Daher noch mal meine Bitte um Hilfe und Korrektur bei folgendem Text:

Welcome to the homepage from the college of social pedagogycs / college of further education / college for social education theory [ auf Deutsch: Fachakademie für Sizialpädagogik]

For attending our school you need
o-level and two years of an internship in a welfare service with children and teenagers
or
a-levels and one year of an internship in a welfare service with children and teenagers
or
an education as a child-nursery.
During your internship there are some weeks, you must go to school, also.

For the diploma as a child care worker you must go to school for two years, the A- and B- course, and after that you must do a practical year.

At school you have some core subjects, for example Pedagogy, Psychology, Studies of practical work, methods , orthopedagogy and social law.
There also some minor subjects like music, arts and education of rhythmics.

Usually school is from 7.45 am till 1.00 or 2.00 pm.
But in the afternon there are often tutorials or practical subjects.
Our school has got a big assortment of tutorials, you can choose between musical, yoga, cross-culture competence and any more.
You also have to learn an instrument, guitar or flute for example.

During going to A- and B-course you have to do some internships again, first in a creche [auf das erste e gehört ein Strich, den ich auf der Tastatur zwar finde, aber nich einsetzen kann] or in a kindergarten, later in after-school care club or in a youth club.

During school it´s very difficult to earn some money, but in Germany you can get sometimes financial aid from the state.
Going to the school is for free, but there are lots of other charges, grant for material, money for copying and costs for important books.

Our school is the biggest college of social pedagogycs / college of further education / college for social education theory in Germany, only in the A-Course there are 250 students at the moment.
In one class there are about 30 students, but in some subjects you are separeted in two groups.
Every class has got its own team of homeroom teachers.
Unfortunately our school isn´t big enough for teaching all students at the same time, some classes must go to another building.

At school there is a cafeteria, where you can have a meal or snack.
You can als use our library, our sports field and the computers, which are in every classroom.
Every student gets ists own code to entering files, printing something or having an acess to the internet.


Theese are just a few informations about our school, if you´ve got some more question, please contact us: mailadress




Mra
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Welcome to the homepage of the College of Social Education.

For attending our school you need
o-level and two years of an internship in a welfare service with children and teenagers
or
a-levels and one year of an internship in a welfare service with children and teenagers
or
an education as a child nurse (oder auch: nanny).
During your internship, you must also go to school for some weeks.

For the diploma as a child care worker you must go to school for two years, the A and B course. (Ich weiß nicht genau, was du mit diesem Satz meinst. Ist der A und B course Teil der 2-jährigen Schule oder zusätzlich?) After that you must do a practical year.

The core subjects at school include: Pedagogy, Psychology, Studies of Practical Work, Methods, Orthopedagogy, and Social Law.
There are also minor subjects, such as Music, Arts, and Education of Rhythmics.

Usually, school is from 7:45 am until 1:00 or 2:00 pm.
However, in the afternon there are often tutorials or practical subjects.
Our school has got a big assortment of tutorials, from which you can choose Musical, Yoga, Cross-Culture Competence and many more.
You also have to learn an instrument, guitar or flute for example.
Ich habe einmal angefangen. Am besten wäre, wenn ein Mutterspracherler weitertut und auch meine Ausbesserungen auf Richtigkeit prüft.

Keswick
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Wohnort: Gateshead

Re: Schule auf einer Homepage vorstellen

Beitrag von Keswick »

Ich habe mal weiter gemacht und auch eventuelle Fehler vom Vorposter verbessert.
frollein hat geschrieben:Welcome to the homepage of the College of Applied Sciences für Social Pedagogy.

To attend our school you need
the O-level and a two-year internship in a welfare service with children and teenagers
or
A-levels and a one-year internship in a welfare service with children and teenagers
or
an education as a nurse.
During your internship, you also have to go to school for some weeks.

For the diploma as a child care worker you must go to school for two years, do the A and B course eventuell naeher darauf eingehen, followed by a practical year.

At school you have some core subjects, for example Pedagogy, Psychology, Studies of practical work, methods, orthopedagogy and social law.
There are also some minor subjects like music, arts and education of rhythmics.

Usually school is from 7.45 am till 1.00 or 2.00 pm.
However there are often tutorials or practical subjects in the afternoon.
Our school has got a big assortment of tutorials, you can choose from musical meinst du damit das Musical oder musische Erziehung?, yoga, cross-culture competence and several others.
You also have to learn an instrument, guitar or flute for example.

While going through the A and B course you have to do some internships again, first in a nursery or in a kindergarten, later in an after-school care club or in a youth club.

During school it is very difficult to earn some money, but in Germany you sometimes can get financial aid from the state.
Attending the school is for free, but there are lots of other charges, grant for material, money for copying and costs for important books.

Our school is the biggest College of Applied Sciences für Social Pedagogy in Germany, with currently 250 students in the A course alone.
There are about 30 students in one class, but in some subjects are separated into two groups.
Every class has got its own team of home room teachers.
Unfortunately our school isn´t big enough for teaching all students at the same time, some classes must move to another building.

At school there is a cafeteria, where you can have a meal or snack.
You can als use our library, our sports field and the computers, which are in every classroom.
Every student gets its own code for entering files, printing something or accessing the internet.

These are just a few informations about our school, if you have any more questions, please contact us: mailaddress
Bitte keine Korrektur- / Erklärungsanfragen per PN.
British English (BE) Sprecher.

frollein
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Beitrag von frollein »

Vielen Dank! :)

Bevor ich blöd rum frage, schaue ich mich mal nach Grammatikerläuterungen zu must und have to do um, ähem.
Aber darf ich danach fragen?
Creche mit besagtem Strich haben wir im Unterricht gelernt, Kinderkrippe, Krabbelstube, alles, was wir als "Elementarbereich" bezeichnen.
Nurse ist doch die Krankenschwester?
Das wäre nicht gemeint, sondern die Kinderpflegerin.Hab noch mal geschaut, ob ich mich verschieben habe, aber ich hab unter meinen Vokabeln: nursery oder nursery nurse , die Kinderpflegerin, der Kinderpfleger.
Mit musical ist tatsächlich das Musical als Seminar/Übung gemeint.
Den Rest hab ich erst mal kapiert. :D

Keswick
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Beitrag von Keswick »

Hier wird als Kinderpflegerin das Wort nurse verwendet, nursery nurse ist ebenfalls richtig, so doppelt gemoppelt es auch klingen mag. Du kannst beides verwenden.

Und wo bist du nun wegen must und have to nicht durchgestiegen?
Bitte keine Korrektur- / Erklärungsanfragen per PN.
British English (BE) Sprecher.

frollein
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Beitrag von frollein »

Habe jetzt hier keine Erklärungen zu must und have to gefunden, hab ich falsch gesucht?
"have to" ist in Deutsch "etwas tun müssen", wenn ich die Korrektur richtig verstehe?

Aber da gab es doch ganz abgefahrene Regeln, mit mustn´t, needn´t, etc, usw. Und wann wird "must" überhaupt verwendet?
ich muss mir erst mal Grundlagen aneignen, bevor ich konkrete Fragen stellen kan.
Ich muss mir wirklich ein Grammatikbuch kaufen und noch mal einiges wiederholen. :(


LG,
frollein

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