wir mussten in Englisch einen Text über die Entwicklung der Fortbewegungsmittel schreiben.
Da ich in Englisch leider nicht so gut bin, wäre es gut wenn sich jemand mal meinen Text durchlesen und korrigieren könnte (grammatisch,sprachlich) da er eingesammelt und benotet wird.
Ich sag schon mal Danke!
Text:
The text is about the development of the progressive movement means from the early century to today.
Before the development began was it people only possible trough runs oneself to move later then also with the assistance of the horses.
As it then already in the year 4000 v.Chr, to the development of the wheel came, the progressive movement means was facilitated for the people.
In the following thousands of years it was now possible for the people to build and used carriages and cars, which always developed themselves further and improved. Thus it came to the emergence of steam vehicles. Now it was possible to move even problem-free over longer distances.
An advancement of these vehicles was the steam engine. It connected the larger cities and was a great advantage for the economy in addition for the people. The successors of the steam vehicles were vehicles with engines. These represented a large relief for humans. Also the today’s cars are vehicles with petrol- or diesel engines. However one looks today due to the environment, for alternative to these engines. The railway changed itself over in the course of the time to current and/or to fuel, too. Among the newest inventions rank are the airplane and the rocket.
The airplane makes possible within a short time to put back long distances comfortably. Beyond that the rocket makes a visiting possible of other planets.
The development of the progressive movement means is of enormous importance. The progressive movement means have take up a large rule in our society and are for a lot of people unthinkable.