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Varta
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Könnte mir bitte jemand meine Statistic korrigieren?

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Hallo,

wäre mir wirklich wichtig wenn mich jemand auf meine fehler in meiner statistic aufmerksam machen könnte! soll später mal ein referat werden deshalb sollte es so wenig fehler wie möglich beinhalten! danke im voraus!!

The given bar chart which was published in the internet informs us about the growing number of wind power plants (in thousand) which had been installed per year from 1997 until 2007.

In 1997 were only 7475 wind power plants installed. In the following years the number of them has gone up slightly about additionally 4000 more a year. But in 2002 began 31164 new plants to produce electricity. Compared with the barely 7500 from the beginning has the count more than tripled. Over the span of the next three years the number of installed wind turbines has grown remarkably to concisely 69000 per year. The same goes for the quantity of installed wind power stations from 2005 in contrast to 2007. There has been an enormously increase about over 30000 new plants additional to the rest between this two years.

The scientists who published this set of statistics want to draw our attention to the fact that wind power plants are becoming more and more important for us. In times where oil or gas will be always less available is it important to focuses on renewable energies in general. With this bar chart they clarified us that in the last years an extraordinary increase of renewable energies happened and that they are going to be our future.




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Hallo,

es wäre mir wirklich wichtig wenn mich jemand auf meine Fehler in meiner Beschreibung einer Statistik aufmerksam machen könnte! Es soll später mal ein Referat werden, deshalb sollte es so wenig Fehler wie möglich enthalten! Danke im Voraus!!


The given bar chart which was published on the internet. It informs us about the growing number of wind power stations (in thousand) which had been installed per year from 1997 until 2007.

In 1997 only 7475 wind power stations were installed. In the following years the number of them has gone up by additional 4000 each year. In 2002 31164 new plants were installed to produce electricity. Compared with the barely 7500 at the beginning the number has increased more than three times. Over the span of the next three years the number of installed wind turbines has grown remarkably to nearly 69000 per year. The same applies to the quantity of installed wind power stations from 2005 in contrast to 2007. There has been an enormous increase of over 30000 new plants in addition to the remaining two years.

The scientists, who published this set of statistics, wanted to draw our attention to the fact that wind power plants are becoming more and more important for us. In times where the oil and gas reserves are shrinking more and more it is important to focus on renewable energies in general. With this bar chart they document that in the last years an extraordinary increase of investments in renewable energies happened and this trend is probably going to continue in the future.


May I suggest that you think about the correct use of these terms in your text:
- A wind power station is usually a place were a wind turbine is installed.
- A wind power plant is usually a wind farm were several wind turbines are installed.
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