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Alex621
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Brauche hilfe beim Text korrigieren

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Hallo, ich habe mehrere Texte (weiß nicht ob die so gut reinpassen) aber wollte mal darum bitten sie zu korrigieren und vielleicht ein par wörter zu verschönern :P Handelt sich um ein Spiel, für das ich etwas schreiben will damit andere Leute es besser verstehen können.
Sind viele Fehler drin und auch Begriffe aus dem Spiel die vielleicht nicht jeder versteht habe ich aber eingeklammert. Einfach so stehen lassen die Begriffe. Handelt sich aber fast immer um einen Gegenstand/Person.

1)

"Skeleton King" is definitely not the best hero for competitive play, he's a great hero for people learning the game of "DotA". He has a bad lane control but is a very dangerous "tank" and a decent "ganker". You should play him if you want a big "tank" which is very easy to play and has many options for different items, but you shouldn't play him if you want to show your skills.

2)

Notes: I would play this "build" as "tank","supporter" or "damage dealer". In the beginning you don't need "vampiric aura", cause 5% lifesteal of 60damage is useless.
Better get "stats" in the beginning, cause you need intelligence and strenght for your "mana" and "hp". Skill out "Hellfire Blast" as fast as possible, cause it's veryusefull for ganks
and skill your ultimate everytime it's possible. It's very usefull to have a second life. But once you are level 12 get critical. Now you've got much damage and enough "mana/hp" so
it's very usefull. After critical, get lifesteal. 20% lifesteal with a 300damage critical are amazing.


3)


In the "early game" first make sure that you've got a ranged partner or a good supporter on your lane (look down for good allies).
Never go on a solo lane with him. You should prefer the Scourge top or the Sentinel bottom lane.
Try to gank some opponents at level 5 and with a stunner try a firstblood at level 1-3,
but stay a bit passive till you've got your ulti. Then you can get agressive.
Farm as much as possible till level 8 cause you need much money for your itembuild.
If you want to know how to farm better read this:


4)

In the "mid game" try to still gank and decide which build you want to choose. You should keep a TP scroll in your inventory all the
time. It helps you to gank, survive and to defend your base. If you haven't got enough gold for the build now,
farm in the woods. For more info how to farm in the woods look at this guide: -


5)

Now it's the "late game". At this point you're a strong damage dealer or (and) a good tank. You should have "Power Treads, 2Bracers, Armlet and Desolator/Eye ok Skaadi/Radiance" and maybe a "Heart/BKB". Now you should make use of this. Help to gank, try solo "roshan" and push. Often look or place wards at the runes. They are amazing for you now. Leoric with a double damage rune and the game is over.

6)

Armlet: This item is very strong for it's price. It's great for ganks and you can buy cheap requirements so you've got a bonus all the time, unlike Radiance.There you have to save your gold till you've got 3800. So you've got abad inventory all the time.


Desolator/Eye of Skaadi: Here you have to decide, if you want to make a desolator or an eye of skaadi. If you've got mana problems you should choose the Eye ofSkaadi. It increases your mana hardly and you've got a slow. Moreover, you'll get more dmg/hp and so on. But if you've got enough mana choose Desolator. With this item you can deal great damage cause of it's corruption.

Heart/BKB: In the late game you are too strong to ignore, so they will cast all disables on you. Thats very nasty, so you should buy a Black King Bar to block them. But if they've got no disables try to make a Heart of Terasque. With this item you've got much hp and a good damage boost too.


7)


Radiance: This item is very expensive! You've to farm a lot for it, but when you've got it you can farm really good and you've got a very high damage output.

Armlet: This item is very strong for it's price. It's great for ganks and you can buy cheap requirements so you've got a bonus all the time.

Heart/BKB: In the late game you are too strong to ignore, so they will cast all disables on you. Thats verynasty, so you should buy a Black King Bar to block them. But if they'vegot no disables try to make a Heart of Terasque. With this item you've got much hp and a good damage boost too.


sollte erstmal mehr als genug sein.
danke

ps: Es kann sein, dass ein par Leerzeilen fehlen. Ist leider durch das kopieren passiert.

mit freundlichen Grüßen,
Alex621




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