[b]!!!!!!!!KORREKTURLESEN MEINER FACHARBEIT!!!!!!![/b]

[YelizTuran]

George W. Bush is born as the first of six children in New haven,Connecticut. He grew up in Midland, Houston and texas. His father George H. Bush, later the 41st president of the USA, is in the oil business active. Mr. Bush visits the Phillips Academy in Andover, Massachusetts like his father. He studies at the Yale University in Connecticut and he gets the Bachelors degree plus a conclusion in history. He starts with trainig as a pilot of Texas Air National Guard on the air force base, Ellington. After his basic trainig he is ordered to the second lieutenant of second degree in September 1968 and he promotes to second lieutenant of first degree in November 1970. He finished an occupation for an agricultural firm in Houston/Texas. He also takes part in the election campaign of the republican Winton Blount for the American Senate in Alabama. Besides G.W Bush works further as a pilot at the air force. He establishes an oil- and gas enterprise in Midland, Texas. George W. Bush marries the librarian Laura Welch and he also candidacies for the house of representative in the electoral district West Texas. He is nominated by the republicans however he loses the choice against the democratic candidate Kent Hance. His wife brings the twin daughters Barbara and Jenna on the world. George W. Bush drinks ever larger quantities alcohol. With the time his wife doesn’t want it, but she could watch hopelessly and furiously at the same time how he becomes ever more dependent. W. Bush, who had to put a vocational failure in after the other one, is in a deep crisis. He follows finally a group of Bibles with his friend Bob Evans. This group called >Community Bible Study
born again. George W. Bush moves after Washington D.C, in order to support his father with his candidacy for the office to the president of the USA. He returns after the choice victory of his father to Texas. He buys with other investors the baseball team “Texas Rangers” and takes over the function of the manager. He stands as a candidate for the office of the governor of Texas.After his victory against the democrats Ann Richardson, he is appointed to the governor of Texas. In his term of office he particularly strives around an improvement of the educational facilities. He initiates extensive reductions of taxes and stricter youth penal laws with illegal possession of arms. He puts his portion to “Texas Ranger” in funds-in-trust and gives his position up as a manager of the baseball team. George W. Bush is red-elect with 69% of the voices for the office of the governor of Texas. Bush communicates his candidacy for the office of the president of the United States. The sale of his portion to “Texas Rangers” helps him with the financing of his election. One nominates him to the presidency candidate of the republicans. His rival candidate is the democrat Al Gore, who was eight years vice-president under Bill Clinton.The choice to the president of the United States of America ends with a limited result. After counting lasting for weeks only few hundred voices decide in Florida on the choice victory of the republican candidate Bush. Bush becomes selected as 43. US president. President Bush appeals to the international community of states to form an alliance against the terrorism as a reaction to the terrorist attacks from 11. September.George W. Bush announces a war against the terrorism. The USA makes preparations for a military notice against Afghanistan, whose Taliban regime maintains close contacts to Al Qaida and which grants Osama Bin Laden support and refuge. The USA and GB begin with the air raids on Afghanistan. After the fall of the Taliban regime an interim government is formed in Kabul.

HOOFE,DASS MIR IRGENDJEMAND BEHILFLICH SEIN KANN,DA ICH DIESEN TEXT BIS ZUM 1.MÄRZ 2005 BRAUCHE!!!!
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[YelizTuran]

Da ich nicht vie zeit hatte um hier durchstöbern zu können, also hab ich sofort das erste/zweite Thema hier ausgewählt und hab mir dabei gedacht,dass es IRGENDJEMAND schon lesen würde, und es wäre auch toll, wenn du der/diejenige sein könntest,der/die meine Facharbeit oder ein teil daon korrigiert.... Bitte.. Ich brauchs auf jeden fall.....

[Manhattan]

na ja, wenn man mal die Bezeichnung "Songs, Jokes, etc." weglässt und sich den Untertext ^^ durchliest

Alles zu Liedtexten, Filmen und anderen "netten" Sachen.

, dann könnte es evtl. passen, falls es hier keine anderen foren gibt

off topic.... i know ((-:

[YelizTuran]

Jetzt hilft mir mal BITTE!!!!!
Ich brauchs auf jeden Fall.....
Korrigiert doch BITTE mal kurz den Text,damit ich ihn in meine Facharbeit reinstecken kann.....
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[Manhattan]

ich korrigiere grundsätzlich nicht
da musst du warten bis Ron oder so kommt
Sorry
Außerdem: "Korrigiert doch BITTE mal kurz den Text,damit ich ihn in meine Facharbeit reinstecken kann..... " kurz ist das ja nicht und ich denke es ist ziemlich viel Arbeit damit verbunden

[Manhattan]

ich zitiere mal eine person aus dem Internet, von der ich eigentlich ziemlich viel halte:

Der Sinn der Facharbeit ist, dem Schüler zu zeigen, wie man eine wissenschaftliche Arbeit anfertigt. Das heißt, dass keiner erwarten kann, dass du das alles kannst.

[YelizTuran]

Also,
es ist so,dass mein Lehrer nicht darauf achtet, ob ich zu viele fehler drin hätte,oder nicht, von daher, wäre es sehr nett von dir, wenn du nur die fehler korrigieren könntest....
Ich hoffe, dass du mir den Gefallen tun würdest...
Yeliz