Present Tense

[Engliisch]

Hey Leute (:

Ich brauche dringend eure Hilfe!
Wir machen gerade in Englisch eine Lektüre.
Wir sollen von jedem Kapitel eine Summary (Inhaltsangabe) machen.
Als Zeitform sollen wir 'PRESENT TENSE' verwenden. Leider habe ich vergessen wie man das anwedet, und finde auf dieser Seite keine Hilfe, weil ich jetzt im Moment ziemlich durcheinander mit den ganzen Zeitformen bin.
Bitte helft mir!
Was ist Present Tense ?

Danke !!!!!

LG,
Engliisch

[Engliisch]

Hi Leute (:

Kann mir jmd. als Beispiel, bitte diesen Satz in Present Tenseübersetzen?

Ein Hund namens Buck lebt in Santa Clara in der Villa. Sein Besitzer ist Mr. Miller.

Diesen Satz in Present Tense auf Englisch ??
Bitte helft mir, ich brauchedringend ein Beispiel.

Danke, diese Seite hilft mir so viel !! (:

[MrMyagi]

Der Satz steht doch schon im Present Tense.
Prensent Tense heißt nur alle Zeiten der Gegenwart.
Bsp.: Der Hund SPIELT mit dem BAll.
Der Mann ANGELT ein Fisch
usw.

Der Hund SPIELTE mit dem BAll ist z.B PAST TENSE, also Vergangenheit

[Engliisch]

Ok, danke.
Ich wollte nur sicher gehen (=
Diese Seite ist so toll, da kann man immer sicher gehen.
Man bekommt immer eine Antwort. =)

[Engliisch]

Hallo (:

In Englisch lesen wir die Lektüre >The call of the wild<
Zu jedem Kapitel sollen wir eine Summary ( Inhaltsangabe ) machen.
Als Zeitform sollen wir Present Tense verwenden.
Nun habe ich eine Inhaltsangabe gemacht, bin mir aber sehr unsicher im Text :/
Mit den Zeiten & der Rechtschreibung
Könnt ihr euch meinen Text vielleicht durchlesen und mir dann die (vielen) Fehler sagen ?



It was in year 1897. Buck lives in a villa in Mr Miller’s big house in the sunny Santa Clara valley. Nearby was a river and around the villa were large gardens and fields of fruit trees. Buck was chief dog. He was born here, and this was his place. He was four years old. It was a fantastic life, because all people from the house, like Mr Miller’s sons, his daughters and the grandchildren plays with him.
It was all so good, until that men and dogs were hurrying to north- west Canada to look for gold.
Manuel, one of Mr Miller’s gardeners, needs money for his large family.
This was the badest day for Buck. Mr Miller went out, and Manuel sell the dog for an man, who kidnapped him. He drove with the man with a train to a bar, two men put Buck into a box and drove with him to the north. For two days and nights Buck got hungrier and thirstier and angrier.
In Seattle four men took Buck to a small, high-walled back garden, where a fat man in an old red coat was waiting. The man fightes with Buck. On his face was blood.
Then came Perrault, he sell the dog from the man. Perrault was a man, who had more dogs. He teached the dogs for being sledge dogs. On this day was the first snow for Buck.


Danke.
LG,
Engliisch

[Engliisch]

Och nein. :C
Ok, danke ^^

[Engliisch]

Ich hab's neu gemacht & versucht beim Simple Present zu bleiben ..

Wie ist die Inhaltsangabe jetzt ??

1897 - Buck lives in a villa in Mr Miller’s big house in the sunny Santa Clara valley. Nearby was a river and around the villa were large gardens and fields of fruit trees. Buck was chief dog. He borns here, and this was his place. He’s four years old. It’s a fantastic life, because all people from the house, Mr Miller’s sons, his daughters and the grandchildren play with him.
It’s all so good, until that men and dogs were hurrying to north- west Canada to look for gold.
Manuel, one of Mr Miller’s gardeners, needs money for his large family.
This was the badest day for Buck. Mr Miller goes out, and Manuel sell the dog for an man, who kidnapped him. He drives with the man with a train to a bar, two men put Buck into a box and drive with him to the north. For two days and nights, Buck got hungrier, thirstier, and angrier.
In Seattle four men took Buck to a small, high-walled back garden, where a fat man in an old red coat is wait. The man fight with Buck. On Buck’s face is blood.
Then comes Perrault, he sells the dog from the man. Perrault is a man, who has more dogs. He teaches the dogs for being sledge dogs. On this day is the first snow for Buck.

[MLS]

Da ist immer noch das Past drin:

1897 - Buck lives in a villa in Mr Miller’s big house in the sunny Santa Clara valley. Nearby was a river and around the villa were large gardens and fields of fruit trees. Buck was chief dog. He borns here, and this was his place. He’s four years old. It’s a fantastic life, because all people from the house, Mr Miller’s sons, his daughters and the grandchildren play with him.
It’s all so good, until that men and dogs were hurrying to north- west Canada to look for gold.
Manuel, one of Mr Miller’s gardeners, needs money for his large family.
This was the badest day for Buck. Mr Miller goes out, and Manuel sell the dog for an man, who kidnapped him. He drives with the man with a train to a bar, two men put Buck into a box and drive with him to the north. For two days and nights, Buck got hungrier, thirstier, and angrier.
In Seattle four men took Buck to a small, high-walled back garden, where a fat man in an old red coat is wait. The man fight with Buck. On Buck’s face is blood.
Then comes Perrault, he sells the dog from the man. Perrault is a man, who has more dogs. He teaches the dogs for being sledge dogs. On this day is the first snow for Buck.

Auch sonst ist das Englisch leider nicht besonders gut. Der ganze Text klingt komisch und es sind sehr viele Fehler drin. Schau doch bitte noch mal drüber, denk an das S bei he, she und it und schau dir manche Vokabeln nochmal an. Da macht vieles keine Sinn und man weiß gar nicht, was du ausdrücken willst.

[Engliisch]

Ja, ich glaube ich habe es jetzt verstanden.
Ich habe den Text noch einmal verbessert & hoffe, er ist jetzt besser.

1897 - Buck lives in a villa in Mr Miller’s big house in the sunny Santa Clara valley. Nearby is a river and around the villa are large gardens and fields of fruit trees. Buck is chief dog. He borns here, and this is his place. He’s four years old. It’s a fantastic life, because all people from the house, Mr Miller’s sons, his daughters and the grandchildren play with him.
Buck doesn’t know, that men and dogs are hurrying to north-west Canada to look for gold.
And he doesn’t know that Manuel, one of Mr Miller’s gardeners, needs money for his large family.
This is the badest day for Buck. Mr Miller goes out, and Manuel sells the dog for a man, stealthy. The man works for the other men, who look for gold. The man drives with Buck, with a train to a bar. Two men put Buck into a box and drive with him to the north. For two days and nights, Buck got hungrier, thirstier, and angrier.
In Seattle four men take Buck to a small, high-walled back garden, where a fat man in an old red coat is wait. The man fights with Buck, because Buck won’t love to be kidnapped. Buck will goes away, but the man won’t it. The man beats Buck with a club. On Buck’s face is blood.
Then comes Perrault, he sells the dog from the man. Perrault is a man, who has more dogs. He teaches the dogs for being sledge dogs. On this day is the first snow for Buck.

Ich habe versucht, etwas genauer zu beschreiben.

Danke

[boert]

Was die Grammatik angeht ist da durchaus noch Potential - um es mal vorsichtig auszudrücken.

Schau dir die unregelmäßigen Verben nochmal genauer an.
Und bring ein bißchen Ordnung in Orte und Personen. Leicht verständlich ist es noch nicht wirklich.

[Engliisch]

Wo stimmt denn etwas nicht mit den ''unregelmäßigen Verben'' ?

[boert]

Beispielsweise "badest".

[Engliisch]

Achso, danke (: