also ich hab den Text nochmal abgewandelt, den ich vor ein paar Tagen hier rein gestellt habe und er ist auch länger geworden.
Ich will euch hier nicht damit nerven, der Refrain steht auch noch nicht, also poste ich vielleicht auch nochmal was.
Wäre trotzdem nett, wenn ihr mir nochmal bei dem Sprachlichen helfen könntet, da bald die Aufnahmen anstehen. Wenns feritg ist, könnte ich dann auch mal einen Link zum Lied posten.Gibts Vokabelfehler?
Grammatikfehler?
Bin ich irgendwie mit den Zeiten durcheinander gekommen?
Würde mich wirklich über Hilfe freuen!
Ich danke euch!
Gruß
Und hier der Text:
Verse1
We find perceptions that will hunt us
On the crossroads of our lifes,
It need no Hurricane to break me,
Just a simple made up mind.
But all decisions that I payed for
Will now disappear,
I put my trust in something greater
That will hold me close and dear.
I need some confidence and power,
Something I can get up for,
I need three wishes and the airstream,
You give me all of that more
There will be no storm that I'll fear,
Whenever I'm with you.
I know that you'll guide me through.
Verse 2
We're sitting naked in your bed,
Exposed souls
Below that pictures on the wall
And we're spending our time.
And I see in you eyes
Something from far away,
Like a shiver from home,
That deciphers it all.
God is nearer now than ever,
So will you stay this night together
With me?
We're trusting in infinity,
We're leaving all reality.
There will be no storm that I'll fear,
Whenever I'm with you.
I know that you'll guide me through.
Verse 3
Everytime you touch my skin
You're getting through and reach my mind,
You fill me up with all your softness,
Your intergalactic light.
We're getting higher just from breathing
And deactivate gravity,
To see the world from all these places,
That noone ever reaches.
Below the ocean floor and over
Every birds air route,
I take your hand and catch the morning,
In every grace are you.
There will be no storm that I'll fear,
Whenever I'm with you.
I know that you'll guide me through.