Korrekturlesen eines Satiretextes

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fiona
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Korrekturlesen eines Satiretextes

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Hi!

Hatte einen Satiretext als HA auf (habe Jungle Camp von RTL ausgewählt) und würde mich freuen, wenn einer von euch Korrekturlesen könnte und evtl. Verbesserungsvorschläge geben kann:

Jungle Camp

The Jungle Camp can be found in the deepest and wildest Jungle Australia’s. In this camp are super intelligent people, who want to earn money and wants to stand in the spotlight for a last time. Most of them are unknown people, who were former celebrities and what to have something like a comeback. For this, they try to do everything and also have fun to humiliate oneself. Another point to revalue the show is the specific selection of people who really love each other. The reality of being alone is so true, that many people, who can help them, are just a few meters away. The last point of loving the show are the dump presenters, who have to go to this camp by themselves. Then they can see how they feel when we laugh about their situation.


Danke für eure Hilfe, denn ich bin ich Englisch nicht immer die sicherste!




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