brächte mal hilfe bei einer Inhaltsangabe zu einem Film!

Alles zur englischen Grammatik.
How to deal with English grammar.
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alucard
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brächte mal hilfe bei einer Inhaltsangabe zu einem Film!

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ich schreibe einfach mal den text den ich habe und wäre echt super wenn ihr grammatik und andere sachen verbessern könntet, da ich englisch nicht so gut kann!
danke schonmal im vorraus und der text handelt von dem Film small Soldiers!

Small Soldiers

This Movie is about Toys, the Gorganites this is the good site and the Commando-Elite here are the bad one! The Gorganites leader is Archer and the leader from the Commando-Elite is Chip-Hazard.

The Movie begins thus taht a man from Globotech a War Chip, the X-1000
in the heads of the toys inserts.
The Commando-Elite build Weapons and Vhehicles with Paper clips, screwdrivers and remote contralled cars.
One example is a flame thrower car or a car with a saws.
Christy, Alans girlfriend was kidnapped by the Commando-Elite with pupates. The pupates from Christy was to live aroused from the Commando-Elite.
Alan comes to the house, in there Chisty lives and released she.
Alan and Christy run out the house but the Commando-Elite follows him with her vehicles.

so das wars also danke schonmal!

mfg alucard




maedko

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Small Soldiers

This movie is about toys. The Gorganites are the good ones and the Commando-Elite here are the bad ones. The leader of the Gorganites is Archer and the leader of the Commando-Elite is Chip-Hazard.

The Movie begins when a man from Globotech inserts a war chip, the X-1000, into the heads of the toys. The Commando-Elite build weapons and vehicles with paper clips, screwdrivers and remote-controlled cars.
Two examples are a flame thrower car and a car with a saws.
Christy, Alan's girlfriend, was kidnapped by the Commando-Elite with pupates. The pupates from Christy was to live aroused from the Commando-Elite.(das snalle ich überhaupt nicht, sorry)
Alan comes to Christy's house and releases her.
Alan and Christy run out the house, but the Commando-Elite follow him with her(their vehicles?) vehicles.

wenn du mich brauchst, es dir zu erklären. bitte nur!

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