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Alles zur englischen Grammatik.
How to deal with English grammar.
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Borgler1992
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Kann mir bitte jemand diesen kleinen Text korrigieren?

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Eating disorders

If somebody don’t eats normal portions or sptlits it up, it’s an eating disorder. There are many forms of eating disorder.

Anorexia: You always feel fat. You think that your body is too fat and you don’t eat anough. Sometimes the people don’t eat any more and die. It’s emotional.

Bulemie: If somebody eats a lot of things in a short time and then vomits him. A bulemic has many binge- eats.

Obesity: If you eat too much and can’t stop. You become very fat and have like a bulemic many binge eats.

Eating disorders are very dangerous illneses. They are most emotional.




gpmario
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Sometimes, people stop eating (in general)

I think that would be better...

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