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Michael
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Essay about my holidays ... Bitte überprüfen :-)

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Hallo, da ich diesen Sommer wieder mit der Schule angefangen habe,Klasse 11 und seit 4 Jahren kein English gelernt habe (wegen Ausbildung und Zivi) wollte ich mal fragen ob der Text so einigermaßen OK ist.
Sollten einen Aufsatz über unseren letzten Urlaub schreiben...

Wäre froh wenn mich einer verbessern würde ... :freu:

Essay about my holidays in Zandvoort.
My friensd and i spend a week last summer in Zandvoort, this is a town in Netherland.
Zandvoort is lay near Haarlem and Amsterdam and its directly at the sea.
For one week we have lived in a big tent, it was not beautiful but it was sufficiently.
The camping place was over 10 years old and was full of european people.
I had nver seen so many people on a point with a tent like there.
The temperature was fantastic, we had every day 28 degrees or more.
Because of the hot weather we drunked a lot of cold beer, the beerbrand called Heineken.
After the noon we went to the Racetrack in Zandvoort, its a Track for Bikeraces or for the Deutsch Touren Meisterschaft also called as DTM.
After that we went to the beach and played beachvolleyball or run swimm or we lay on the sun.
In the evening we had grilled steacks and sausages.
After eating the meal we rested ourselves and few hours later we went to the beach and the Partymile.
The partyarea is approximately 20 minutes from our camping place removed.
Later we slept deeply in our big tent.
This was my essay about my last holidays.




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