Reported Speech - Bitte um Korrektur

[Sonja]

Hallo,
ich komme nicht wirklich mit der "Indirekten Rede" klar. Diesbezgl. habe ich eine Aufgabe gelöst und bitte Euch um Korrektur und wenn möglich eine Erklärung dazu.


P. looked really pale! Did she tell you how she felt?
Yes, she did. She said that she has felt anxious

did she tell you why she felt anxiour?
Yes, she did. She said that she has told about the pleasure boat disaster

Oh, she told you about the pleasure boat disaster? Did she tell you what had happened?
Yes, she did. she said that she had seen the disaster on the river

Did she tell you how many people had been on board?
Yes, she did. She said that had been about 150 people on board

did she tell you what one of the survivors had said?
Yes, she did. She said that the survivors had said that the passengers could all have been rescued

Did she tell you who had saved the survivors?
Yes, she did. She said thaat some of them saved themselves. Some had picked up by other boats an G. had helped som survivors.

Did P. tell you what had happened to the boat that had caused the accident?
Yes, she did. She did that the boat had damaged but it had not sank.


Ich denke, dass da sehr viele Fehler drin sind
Vielen lieben Dank im voraus

Gruß
Sonja

[rgriscom]

P. looked really pale! Did she tell you how she felt?
Yes, she did. She said that she felt anxious. (has)

did she tell you why she felt anxious?
Yes, she did. She said that she had told about the pleasure boat disaster (richtig, aber...)

(besser: She said that she was sick because she was telling me about the pleasure boat disaster.)
(she had = when the boat sank)
(she was = when she talked to you)



Oh, she told you about the pleasure boat disaster? Did she tell you what had happened?
Yes, she did. She said that she had seen the disaster on the river. (gut!)

Did she tell you how many people had been on board?
Yes, she did. She said that there had been about 150 people on board

did she tell you what one of the survivors had said?
Yes, she did. She said that the survivors had said that the passengers could all have been rescued. (gut!)

Did she tell you who had saved the survivors?
Yes, she did. She said that some of them saved themselves. Some had been picked up by other boats and G. had helped some survivors.

Did P. tell you what had happened to the boat that had caused the accident?
Yes, she did. She said that the boat was damaged but it had not sank.



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Hope this helps!

-Rgriscom

[Sonja]

Hallo Rgriscom,
vielen lieben Dank für Deine Korrektur. Werde sie mir mal anschauen, vielleicht geht mir dann mal ein Lichtlein auf.

Danke nochmals

Gruß
Sonja