Well, let's first finish this story, okay?Constance hat geschrieben:No. Let's just have the character like that. We can always write another story w/ us some day
Group project: writing our own "novel"
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Gast
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satropa
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Ok let's start talking, writing in english...
The adventure starts in London..but out of some strange and misterous Reasons, the man in his late 20 has to leave his loved home town for Tunisia...
All begins with a visit in a little tunisien shop, close to trafalgar square, where he wants to buy this sweet sticky dates, direct and freshly imported from tunisia.
The adventure starts in London..but out of some strange and misterous Reasons, the man in his late 20 has to leave his loved home town for Tunisia...
All begins with a visit in a little tunisien shop, close to trafalgar square, where he wants to buy this sweet sticky dates, direct and freshly imported from tunisia.
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Gast
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Constance
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Hallo erst einmal,
Tut mir Leid, dass ich eine Weile gebraucht habe, aber ich hatte gestern die Theorie und habe mich das Wochenende über in den Fragebögen begraben. ('Wenn ein auflaufgebremster Anhänger...")... ahh.
Na ja.. finde es jedenfalls toll, dass ihr schon mit den korrigieren angefangen habt und werde jetzt auch weiter schreiben asap.
Fahrt ihr eigendlich über die Ferien weg? Ich bin mit einer Freundin ab nächstem Die. in Spanien.
Ciao,
Melanie
Tut mir Leid, dass ich eine Weile gebraucht habe, aber ich hatte gestern die Theorie und habe mich das Wochenende über in den Fragebögen begraben. ('Wenn ein auflaufgebremster Anhänger...")... ahh.
Na ja.. finde es jedenfalls toll, dass ihr schon mit den korrigieren angefangen habt und werde jetzt auch weiter schreiben asap.
Fahrt ihr eigendlich über die Ferien weg? Ich bin mit einer Freundin ab nächstem Die. in Spanien.
Ciao,
Melanie
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sweety-deluxe
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Ich darf mich das nächste WE mit den Theoriebögen auseinandersetzen 
Bei uns sind erst ab 1.8 Ferien uznd dann heißt es für mich arbeiten aber es ist ja auch ein Job der mir Spaß macht
Ich geh nicht in Urlaub aber meine Mutter besucht jemanden in Seattle,da kann sie mir dann gleich mal einen stadtplan o.ä. von SF mitbringen
Ich wäre so gerne wieder nach London aber mir fehlt einfach das Geld
Bei uns sind erst ab 1.8 Ferien uznd dann heißt es für mich arbeiten aber es ist ja auch ein Job der mir Spaß macht
Ich geh nicht in Urlaub aber meine Mutter besucht jemanden in Seattle,da kann sie mir dann gleich mal einen stadtplan o.ä. von SF mitbringen
Ich wäre so gerne wieder nach London aber mir fehlt einfach das Geld
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Constance
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Hey,
Hier ist die Fortsetzung. Allerdings bedarf es viel Nachkorrektur, glaube ich. Ich habe versucht ein bisschen Hintergrund mit in die Story zu bringen... I got swept away and Mary-Kate is still stnading on that boat and hasn't been kidnapped yet but o well - There is no word limit, is there!
Mary-Kate returned her gaze to the city that had been wrapped in layers of fog only a few hours earlier. Upon her arrival she had been dismayed to discover that she had been a little too confident as far as the choice of her clothes was concerned.
If I had not been forced to dress formally for the business meetings and take along a suit, I would have frozen on that first afternoon.
When she had remarked upon this among her associates, they took pity and showed her around Macy*s to buy sweaters and support the American textile industry. Andrew and his wife Ellen had even insisted that they show her the area on the week ends, including Nappa and Sonoma Valley, where they toured from one winery to another, not without taking the time to sample.
She had been grateful and knew she would have appreciated their excursions a lot more if Carl were with them. Last week-end had been particularly agonizing and when Andrew had proposed to visit Mt. Tamalpais she had kindly refused, feeling too woeful to go anywhere. However he had insisted and when the three of them had arrived at the viewpoint that towered above the entire Bay Area, the long drive up that winding road had been rewarded by a magnificent panorama; white and illuminated clouds, only pierced by the occasional sky scraper in the distance.
I might have cancelled my return flight right then if it wasn't for my fiancé back home. That is just the kind of experience to make you forget about your previous living and apply for a green card.
She wanted to conjure up another memory to kill time but hesitated. Something felt wrong. All of the sudden she knew that she was being watched and instinctively turned. Of those people, who had not sought refuge in the ship’s interior, a group of high school students wearing caps of the local baseball team, the Giant’s, was right behind her. She shifted uneasily, trying not to look too alarmed.
Well, it is up to you what you make of it. Maybe we need to change it a little to fit the style of the opening.
@ sweety-deluxe: ihr habt ja echt spät Ferien! Im August fängt bei mir die Schule wieder an!
Ich gucke mal, wie es in Cala Ratjada mit Internetanschluss aussieht. Ansonsten bis in zwei Wochen, tschüss,
Melanie
Hier ist die Fortsetzung. Allerdings bedarf es viel Nachkorrektur, glaube ich. Ich habe versucht ein bisschen Hintergrund mit in die Story zu bringen... I got swept away and Mary-Kate is still stnading on that boat and hasn't been kidnapped yet
but o well - There is no word limit, is there!Mary-Kate returned her gaze to the city that had been wrapped in layers of fog only a few hours earlier. Upon her arrival she had been dismayed to discover that she had been a little too confident as far as the choice of her clothes was concerned.
If I had not been forced to dress formally for the business meetings and take along a suit, I would have frozen on that first afternoon.
When she had remarked upon this among her associates, they took pity and showed her around Macy*s to buy sweaters and support the American textile industry. Andrew and his wife Ellen had even insisted that they show her the area on the week ends, including Nappa and Sonoma Valley, where they toured from one winery to another, not without taking the time to sample.
She had been grateful and knew she would have appreciated their excursions a lot more if Carl were with them. Last week-end had been particularly agonizing and when Andrew had proposed to visit Mt. Tamalpais she had kindly refused, feeling too woeful to go anywhere. However he had insisted and when the three of them had arrived at the viewpoint that towered above the entire Bay Area, the long drive up that winding road had been rewarded by a magnificent panorama; white and illuminated clouds, only pierced by the occasional sky scraper in the distance.
I might have cancelled my return flight right then if it wasn't for my fiancé back home. That is just the kind of experience to make you forget about your previous living and apply for a green card.
She wanted to conjure up another memory to kill time but hesitated. Something felt wrong. All of the sudden she knew that she was being watched and instinctively turned. Of those people, who had not sought refuge in the ship’s interior, a group of high school students wearing caps of the local baseball team, the Giant’s, was right behind her. She shifted uneasily, trying not to look too alarmed.
Well, it is up to you what you make of it. Maybe we need to change it a little to fit the style of the opening.
@ sweety-deluxe: ihr habt ja echt spät Ferien! Im August fängt bei mir die Schule wieder an!
Ich gucke mal, wie es in Cala Ratjada mit Internetanschluss aussieht.
Ansonsten bis in zwei Wochen, tschüss,Melanie