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tini
Bilingual Newbie
Beiträge: 2
Registriert: 31. Mär 2006 13:31

Könnt ihr mir bitte helfen?

Beitrag von tini »

ich musste in englisch einen dialog anfertigen, nun habe ich das ein wenig ausprobiert und das ist bei rausgekommen (mein englisch ist echt miserabel und ich wollte euch fragen, ob ihr mir da helfen könnt und den text korrigieren könnt und mir tips geben könnt...danke im voraus)
also der text:
Person 1=P1
Person 2=P2
Person 3=P3

P1 : Welcome to our travel tour !
We start here at Convoy Point.

P2: And how we will go on?

P1: Look, there are Elliott Key and Boca Chita Key.

P3: Are there other Keys here?

P1: Yes there are for example Adams Key, Sands Key and a lot of other Keys.

P2: And how can we get to a key?

P1: We only can go by boat to our first station, Boca Chita Key.

P3: Oh look over there, there are 3 delphins.

P2: Yes I heard about the animal kingdom.

P3: Here you can find delphins, sharks, turtels and birds.

P1: Under the water, there are beautiful coral reefs. They are famous for there mostly kinds of fish. Now we come to Boca Chita Key

P2: What can we do at Boca Chita Key?

P3: Yes that is also important for me, because I will go there for two days in
my holiday.

P1: You can do lots of sports and activities there. You can camping or having picnics, you can fishing or going by boat.

P2: Oh the nature is beautiful. The palms and the beach are so fantastic.

P3: No! I don`t think so. I think Elliott Key is a little bit more important
for me.

P2: Ok we can drive to Elliott Key, but Boca Chita Key was great.

P3:I heard that Elliott Key is bigger than Boca Chita Key, is that right?

P1:Yes thats right, but if you want to dip here, thats dangerous, because
off the giant stones under the water.

P2:Oh thats not so good and are there dangerous stones on Boca Chita Key?

P1: No thats not so dangerous, but you have more activities like
camping,riding or booting at Elliott Key.

T3:That is great. I think Elliott Key is beautiful and I go there in my
holiday.

das wars :)




Waabooz
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Registriert: 30. Mär 2006 12:01

Beitrag von Waabooz »

Delfine heißen dolphins
They are famous for their variety of fish.
It is imortant to me (nicht for)
You can camp or have picnics.. you can fish or do a boat trip..
The palm trees and beaches are...
The palm trees and beaches are...

Bei ARE brauchst du den Plural und es heißt IMPORTANT TO

tini
Bilingual Newbie
Beiträge: 2
Registriert: 31. Mär 2006 13:31

Beitrag von tini »

ich danke dir aber sonst ist der text schon ok so?hab ziemliche probleme mit der grammatik....

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