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[tiuwiu]

Hallo, kann jemand bitte über meine Sätze schauen?
Es geht um einen Kartentrick. Paul ist der Zauberer und James der Mitspieler.

James took the envelope, which he had placed underneath a book for safety's sake, and opened it. He fished out the folded note, Paul had described and deposited there a few minutes ago. There in big and clear letters stood the words: Eight of diamonds.

Danke und schönen Sonntag.
Tiu

[Keswick]

Hallo, kann jemand bitte über meine Sätze schauen?
Es geht um einen Kartentrick. Paul ist der Zauberer und James der Mitspieler.

James took the envelope, which he had placed underneath a book for safekeeping, and opened it. He fished out the folded note that Paul had described and deposited there a few minutes ago. On it in big and clear letters stood the words: Eight of Diamonds.

Danke und schönen Sonntag.
Tiu

[tiuwiu]

Ganz lieben Dank Keswick