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Gaming is underrated
 
 
In the following, I’m going to explain why gaming is underrated, because I hear many people discuss lately, if gaming is underrated or not. There are many Aspects why gaming is not underrated. First of all we could make a school subject, which could be gaming. There are many jobs today, where gaming could be useful. For example eSport player or coaches. Furthermore they are not bad payed. With other words there are many subjects that you do not need later, so why can not be gaming be a subject? For example the eSport player KuroKy won with his Team „Kuro Salehi Takhasomi“ the dota 2 championship. His team got a prize money of 9.3 million euro. KuroKy got as the team captain a bit above 3 million Euro, so is the 24 year old player now millionaire. Another point is that many students do not like to go to school. That is why we need gaming as a subject. Every students hates Mondays. The weekend is over and they need to learn. Because of gaming they would like to go on Mondays to school. For example they come to school and start to play 2 hours counter strike before they do Math, English or other subjects. To put it in a nutshell every student would love to go to school. But there are more aspects why gaming is underrated. Another aspect is that gaming is good for the human body, a study shows us that your eyes get better, your hand-eye coordination gets better, you train your reflexes and many more, but i will just explain this three points. Firstly your eyes get better. That is most of all for the people who play shooter, because they need to look closer and need to see the contrast of the enemy and the background. For example an gray enemy is behind a box and the background is gray then u need to see his weapon, which got a different color. Secondly your hand-eye coordination is improving, because when you play u will not look where your hand is. You need to concentrate on the game and your hands will move like you want them to move. There are no player, who do not know where what is on their computer. For example pro player know exactly how they need to move their mouse to get it to the position of the enemy. Furthermore the enemy will move and do not stand still. So that you need to follow him with your eyes and your mouse. Not to forget that you will train your reflexes as well. It is very common that player, who play shooter got good reflexes. For example a enemy is jumping to see if your behind the wall, then you need to move your mouse fast enough to the enemy and shoot him. Last but not least gaming is good against depressions. There are games, which are helping you against depression like SPARX. But not that it only helps you against mental depression, it also helps against depression when you got a car accident and cant move your legs anymore. For example virtual reality glasses, where you are the person in the game. You can start to run and jump again  To sum it up gaming is healthy. My last aspect is that nobody knows how the technology will develops in the future. There are no gamer, who do not know what their computer can do and knows every little part of it. That means if we got eyeglasses where we can write whatsapp messages or do other stuff in the future. Then would a gamer have no problem to operate it. In addition there could come many more jobs, where you need to be good at gaming. As we can already see the technology is quite far developed. Most of the gamer build there own computer. That means that they know quite much about computers and IT, this will help them to find a job. In my opinion gaming is underrated. On the one hand gaming will be important for the future and on the other hand it is good for your health. The first step could be to add gaming to a subject. Then students would love to go to school. Therefore they would get better grades. Also it is good for their health.
 




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