Diary to get better

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max0211
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Diary to get better

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Hey,
i love my Browser, connection Error. Now all text i wrote is lost.
I start this thread because i want improve my english. So i hope that a diary can improve it, when you emend me. I will talk about my daily adventures :).
If you had a question, please ask.

Have a nice Day!




Duckduck
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Re: Diary to get better

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max0211 hat geschrieben: Hi max0211 und willkommen im Forum! :)
Gute Idee, die Du da hattest! Da Du Dich ja verbessern möchtest, nehme ich mal an, es macht Dir nichts aus, wenn wir Deine Fehlerchen verbessern?! Ich fange einfach mal an:


Hey,

I love my browser, connection error. Now all of the / the whole text I wrote is lost. "I" als Personalpronomen immer groß schreiben. Alle anderen Substantive immer klein schreiben, es sei denn, sie sind Namen für Personen oder Dinge.
I start this thread because I want to improve my English. "want" steht nur ohne "to", wenn ein Objekt folgt: I want a biscuit. Folgt eine Verb, muss ein "to" eingefügt werden: I want to sleep. "English" ist ein von einem Namen abgeleitetes Adjektiv (Nationalität) und wird deshalb groß geschrieben.
So I hope that writing a diary can improve it - when you help me / correct my mistakes. I will talk about my daily adventures :).
If you have any questions, please ask.

Have a nice day!
Grüße
Duckduck
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max0211
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Re: Diary to get better

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Hey Duckduck,
yes thats what I want. Thank you very much!

max0211
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Re: Diary to get better

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Good Morning,
today I will drive to Berlin and will join a book presentation, it will be a privat atmosphere(tone?). With a group of 45 people, which I only know from a Twitter group. After this presentation I will sleep at a hotel. On Saturday I will travel around in Berlin and take some picture with my reflex camera. I hope i find some location that not everybody had seen.
Photograph (Taking photos?) is one of my hobbys. I love it , because landscape photography is my favorit type and everything is decelerated. When I drive or walk around and see something that I like to shoot, I searching for the perfect spot. This is a very time consuming (zeitraubendes) part from my hobby, partially it took 20 minutes or more. But after that procedure, when I see the pictures i'm happy. Of course 60-80 percent of the pictures are trash, because I rather have more pictures then less.
Sometimes month's after a phototour I still watch the "old" sorted out pictures and sometimes I find some very good pictures. I don't know why. I think its because after the tour I had some pictures in my head an don't see the other good stuff.
Have a nice Friday and Weekend...

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