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Sunshine❤
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Short Summary ( Bitte korrigieren-Danke!)

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Hallo ihr Lieben, :read:
ich habe eine Zusammenfassung geschrieben und würde mich freuen, wenn jemand sie korrigieren könnte...:-)
Summary:
The text "..." written by ... and published on ... reveals the secret behind the expression "Y.culture" and describes its development step by step.
At the beginning of the text the author clarifies that the 20th-century phenomenon, the "Y.culture", is a social category. Its creation was influenced by the increase of life standards and leisure time as well as the explosion of post-war consumer culture and better research into adolescents.
Moreover, he states that the period between childhood and adult life is just recently labeled as being a culture. Many people define this culture as a dangerous and misunderstood one. Furthermore, he explains the transition of British youth subcultures through US films and music in the mid-50s to the late 70s, where dresses and hairstyles start to become unique. However, this becomes unimportant in the late 70s and early 80s, when teenagers choose to be less gang oriented. 
Funnily enough they even start behaving as a teenager does, nowadays.




Keswick
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Re: Short Summary ( Bitte korrigieren-Danke!)

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Sunshine❤ hat geschrieben: Hallo ihr Lieben, :read:
ich habe eine Zusammenfassung geschrieben und würde mich freuen, wenn jemand sie korrigieren könnte...:-)
Summary:
The text "..." written by ... and published on ... reveals the secret behind the expression "Y.culture" and describes its development step by step.
At the beginning of the text the author clarifies that the 20th-century phenomenon, the "Y.culture", is a social category. Its creation was influenced by the increase of life standards and leisure time as well as the explosion of post-war consumer culture and better research into adolescents.
Moreover, he states that the period between childhood and adult life has only recently been labeled as being a culture. Many people define this culture as a dangerous and misunderstood one. Furthermore, he explains the transition of British youth subcultures through US films and music in the mid-50s to the late 70s, where dresses and hairstyles start to become unique. However, this becomes unimportant in the late 70s and early 80s, when teenagers choose to be less gang oriented. 
Funnily enough they even start behaving like teenagers do nowadays.
Bitte keine Korrektur- / Erklärungsanfragen per PN.
British English (BE) Sprecher.

Sunshine❤
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Re: Short Summary ( Bitte korrigieren-Danke!)

Beitrag von Sunshine❤ »

Thank you for editing my English, Keswick!!!! :big_thumb:
Could I kindly ask you to check my other summary, too? :)
Many thanks in advance!

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