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Hey Sweety
Thank you for your letter and the nice photos of your holidays. It was nice to hear from you. I am writing to tell you from my last week in Spain. I was in Spain like each year. It was so great, the weather was nearly always good.
On Sunday I arrived Spain with the travel bus. My Parents fetched me at the car stop. In the same place was also my friends July, Stefanie with his boyfriend and the parents. And other friends of the following years in Spain.
On Monday I went in the sea, it was very warm. On this afternoon I went shopping with my friends. Later we went in the Pergola and looked the animation show.
At the next day we went at the pool, by the wellness. Later we ate in a China restaurant, it was very good.
On Wednesday I and my parents went to a road market, it was much fun.
The next morning was bad weather so I phoned my sister Sandy.
Only few days and I drove with my parents into the Switzerland. With the car we had 10 hours I slept all the time.
In Spain it was a very nice week we had so much fun.
I hope I hearing from you soon. Have a nice day.
Lovely greets Tina