Bewerbung Praktikum

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Prisma
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Bewerbung Praktikum

Beitrag von Prisma »

Hallo Leute!

Ich würde mich sehr freuen wenn mal jemand über meine Bewerbung schauen könnte, da es das erste mal ist das ich eine englische Bewerbung schreibe und es mir mehr mühe gemacht hat als gedacht.
Ich danke schonmal für die Arbeit!



Applying for an internship in the field of ***

Dear Ms. ***,



I read your advertisement posted on *** for an internship in *** with great interest and I wish to apply for the offered position.



I am studying *** at the University of Applied Sciences in *** and I preparing my Bachelor thesis at the moment.
First experiences in the optical industry I could collect during my apprenticeship as *** . At the moment I am working for *** in the product development.
During my studies I could acquire the fundamentals of construction with CAD-software. Because for me this has always been a pleasure,
I would be glad if you gave me the opportunity to deepen my knowledge in this area.


An internship in *** is a great chance for me to achieve valuable experience while working in a company abroad and improve my language skills.
I am pleasant, reliable and I am gladly learn new topics. Furthermore punctuality and sense of responsibility are naturally for me.

If you require any more information, please feel free to contact me anytime. I am looking forward to hearing from you.



Yours sincerely



***




Delfino
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Wohnort: UK

Re: Bewerbung Praktikum

Beitrag von Delfino »

Prisma hat geschrieben:Hallo Leute!

Ich würde mich sehr freuen wenn mal jemand über meine Bewerbung schauen könnte,
da es das erste Mal ist, dass ich eine englische Bewerbung schreibe und es mir mehr Mühe gemacht hat als gedacht.
Ich danke schon einmal für die Arbeit!



Application for an internship in the field of ***

Dear Ms. ***,

I read your advertisement posted on *** for an internship in *** with great interest,
and therefore, I wish to apply for this vacant position.

Currently I am studying *** at the University of Applied Sciences in ***,
and I am preparing my Bachelor thesis on ***.

During my apprenticeship to become an *** I gained my first experience in the optical industry.
Since *** I have been working in the product development department of ***.
My studies allowed me to learn the fundamentals of construction with CAD software,
which has always been a pleasure. Therefore, I would be glad about any opportunity to
practise my skills and deepen my knowledge in this area.

An internship in *** is a great chance for me to gain valuable work experience
while working in a company abroad and practising my English language skills.
I am pleasant, reliable and I will gladly learn new skills. Furthermore,
punctuality and a sense of responsibility are naturally for me.

Please feel free to contact me, if you require any further information.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.


Yours sincerely,

***
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