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adeinert
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Dear all,
For my PhD Project I am searching for people participating in a 10-minutes online-survey: I am investigating the behavior of leaders and its influence on the performance of the team.
I am very grateful for your participation!

http://survey.jacobs-university.de/cgi-bin/vignette.cgi
Thank you very much!!
Please give me also some hints, how I can improve my englisch in the study!





Duckduck
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Re: Please participate!!

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adeinert hat geschrieben:Dear all,
For my PhD Project I am searching for people participating in a 10-minutes online-survey: I am investigating the behavior of leaders and its influence on the performance of the team.
I am very grateful for your participation!

http://survey.jacobs-university.de/cgi-bin/vignette.cgi
Thank you very much!!
Please give me also some hints, how I can improve my englisch in the study!

Hi adeinert und willkommen im Forum! :)

Ich habe mir die ersten beiden Seiten der Umfrage angesehen, da ich die Fragen nicht beantwortet habe, ging es nicht weiter.

Aber darf ich freundlich fragen: hast Du die englischen Texte verfasst und auch die Fragen formuliert? Denn es sind mir einige Fehler aufgefallen und auch bei den Formulierungen gäbe es wohl ein paar Verbesserungsmöglichkeiten. Wenn das Ganze allerdings so vorgegeben ist, vergiss meine Anmerkung. :big_thumb:

Grüße
Duckduck
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Delfino
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Re: Please participate!!

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adeinert hat geschrieben:Dear all,

For my PhD Project I am looking for people who would participate in a 10-minutes online-survey.
I am investigating the behavior of team leaders and its influence on the performance of their team.
I'd be very grateful for your participation!

http://survey.jacobs-university.de/cgi-bin/vignette.cgi

Thank you very much!

Could you please give me some hints on how I can improve the English used in my questionnaire?
May I suggest you post the complete text in this forum. So we can provide you with feedback and suggestions on
how you can improve the English used in your questionnaire.

Please find below the description of a hypothetical situation.
May kindly ask you to assume that you are the person at the center of this team. (team member or leader?)
While reading, please try to vividly imagine yourself in this environment.
...
...is supplied without liability.
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tiorthan
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Re: Please participate!!

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Delfino hat geschrieben:
Please find below the description of a hypothetical situation.
May I kindly ask you to assume that you are the person at the center of this team. (team member or leader?)
While reading, please try to vividly imagine yourself in this environment.
...
Although, I don't think that a task description needs this level of politeness.
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