wenn Fehler korrigiert werden

Hello, my name is Anna, I am 17 years old and I was born in Berlin.
And I also live in Berlin. My mom's name is Patricia and my father is called Jan.
They are both 52 years old. My mother works as a kitchen assistant in a nursing home.
My father works as a truck driver for the Bundeswehr.
I have 3 brothers and 2 sisters.
My oldest brother is called Alexander, he is 30 years old, then comes Florian and then Marc.
My oldest Sister is Laura, she is 31 years old, and my other sister is Jasmin, she is 28 years old.
So I am the youngest in my family.
In my free time I like traveling. My destinations are not always very far from Berlin.
Even if it is only 100km far from Berlin, for example, I am happy to go there.
I like to explore other cities and countries, as well as the sights and cultures of them.
Traveling is also a good opportunity to do a short Shopping-Tour. The Prices in many large cities,
are cheaper than in Berlin, so it is ideal to make bargains.
Until now, I was in London, in Hungary, in Italy and Turkey. In Germany, I used
the Baden-Württemberg Ticket and the Bavaria Ticket. So I have almost see all of the Cities from
Baden-Württemberg and Bavaria. Cities such as Munich, Karlsruhe, Mannheim and much more.
My Favorite travel destination is Turkey, because there are so many beautiful sights, like the Galata Tower,
the Hagia Sophia and so on. The sea is very beautiful, too. And you can make good bargains there.
Also wie gesagt, würde mich über eine Korrektur freuen..
Kann auch sein das paar Vokabeln falsch sind oder ähnliches.
Noch Zusätzlich eine Frage.
Ist das richtig das Staplerfahrer truck driver heißt?
Und der Beruf Küchenhilfe = kitchen assistant?
Vielen Dank im Voraus