Hallo,
ich schreibe am Freitag eine Englisch Arbeit. Ich habe mich schon ein bisschen vorbereitet und paar Sätze über das Thema "The greenhouse effect" geschrieben.
Würde mich über eine Korrektur sehr freuen.
Danke im Voraus
The greenhouse effect is a natural phenomen, that is responsible for the warming of the earths surface. It is caused by the emisson of greenhose gases like carbon dioxid or methane. This gases are accumulates in the atmosphere and they prevent the heat radiation from the surface into space. That is a normal natural process but the greenhouse gases are increasing by human failure and the earth temerature is raising and it comes to the climate change. Humans are increasing the amount of e.g. carbon dioxid if they burning fossil fuels for energy and transport purposes. A solution against increasing is renewable energy. Furthermore renewable energy is sustainability.
A short text about greenhouse effekt - Bitte um Korrektur
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Good luck saysrelief.06 hat geschrieben:Hallo,
ich schreibe am Freitag eine Englisch Arbeit. Ich habe mich schon ein bisschen vorbereitet und paar Sätze über das Thema "The greenhouse effect" geschrieben.
Würde mich über eine Korrektur sehr freuen.
Danke im Voraus
Hi relief!
Dann wollen wir doch mal sehen!
The greenhouse effect is a natural phenomenon which is responsible for the warming of the earth's atmosphere and surface. It is caused by the emission of the so-called greenhouse gaseslikecarbon dioxide and methane. These gasesareaccumulatesin the atmosphere andtheykeep the heat radiation from the surface of the earth from disappearing into space. This is a normal natural process. Our lifestyle, however, has been the cause of an enormous increase in the concentration of the greenhouse gases. As a consequence, the earth's temperature is rising, thus causing the climate change. We are increasing the amount of e.g. carbon dioxide by burning fossil fuels for energy and transport purposes. A possible solution to the problems caused by the greenhouse effect would be the use of renewable energy sources. These - being more ecologically compatible - would also support the necessary environmental policy of sustainability.
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