Are these sentences correct ? Any advice

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jokinghorse
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Are these sentences correct ? Any advice

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Hello,

are these sentences correct, have u got any advices for me in context of this sentence.

Future changes
Whatever is happening in the future, people should care about global warming because
scientists are not sure whether if the pronounced changes are becoming real or if they will not. Some of the changes should better be realized so that the development of alternative energy sources can go on as far as possible.




joy
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Re: Are these sentences correct ? Any advice

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Hello,

are these sentences correct; may I ask you for advice in context of these sentences?

Future changes
Whatever is will be happening in the future, people should care about global warming. because
Scientists are not sure whether if or not the pronounced changes are becoming real will become a reality or if they will not. Nevertheless, some of the changes should better be realized so that the development of alternative energy sources can, as far as possible, be continued go on as far as possible.
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Ich habe den ersten Satz duckducktisch gekürzt, wenn du meinst, was ich meine. Wie immer - noch mehr Augen erwünscht.
Grüsse
joy

Liebe Grüsse joy


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Re: Are these sentences correct ? Any advice

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joy hat geschrieben:Future changes
Whatever (might) happens in the future, people should care about global warming.
Scientists are not sure whether or not the pronounced changes will become (a) reality.
Nevertheless, some of the changes should be realized anyway.
This way the development of alternative energy sources can, as far as possible, be continued.
joy hat geschrieben:Ich habe den ersten Satz duckducktisch gekürzt, wenn du meinst, was ich meine.
Wie immer - noch mehr Augen erwünscht.
The competence level of Duckduck, Keswick, George and other members :ballon:
who have studied this subject are never reached by mere mortals like us.
They really know what they are doing and why...
...is supplied without liability.
IELTS 7 Good user: operational command, occasional inaccuracies

joy
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Re: Are these sentences correct ? Any advice

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Ja, da hast du recht - das merkt man auch!
Aber du hast auch grosse Fortschritte gemacht und verdienst ein Kompliment!
Danke für die Verbesserung! :wink1:

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joy

Liebe Grüsse joy


jokinghorse
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Re: Are these sentences correct ? Any advice

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thank you very much for this fast and great answers

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