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**Deagle**

Also wir haben die Aufgabe bekommen einen Comment zu schreiben und zwar zu der Frage :

- Do you think that the American Dream is still alive today ?

Ich habe schon einen Vorschlag , jedoch finde ich den echt schlecht . Weil ich die eigentliche Frage nicht wirklich beantworten kann . Ich habe mich mit dem Thema noch nie weiter auseinander gesetzt , sodass ich alles was da drin steht entweder im Unterricht aufgefasst habe oder mir aus dem Internet rausgesucht habe .
Ich hoffe ihr könnt mir weiterhelfen

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For most Americans give the American Dream the motivation and incentive for actions and the manual of life.
Everyone have his own definition of ,,American Dream''. Some think about freedom ,equality and the dream to live a full life other associate with American Dream to get from a lower class fame and fortune and reach a higher class .
As you can see the definition are quiet various and dependent from everyone .
But one thing of all is always the same to realise the aim and to make your dreams come true. Many people think America is the gate for a succesful life with the chance to get easily luxus and a well-being but behind that are hard working . You have to make sacrifices in your life to reach them . It's not so easy than people think.
Of course the USA is a highly developed country of economic with advantages and in contrary than a developing country or a country with strong bureaucracy a better chance to make your dreams come true .
However these facts alone aren't a guarantee for a fine life. You only have a better view for the future.
To live the American Dream today is often wishful thinking ,because the time have changed.
And there are one other negative aspect . Most people only have to realise their own dreams and think of but oneself. In following the USA has become a wastful consumer society of lonely individuals.
In my opinion the main thought of the American Dream to make your dreams come true is right and can be reality with hard working.

Delfino

**Deagle** hat geschrieben:

For most Americans the American Dream provides the motivation or is the incentive for their actions and is used as the manual of life.
Everyone has his own definition of the ,,American Dream''.
For some it's freedom, equality and the chance to live a full life,
and others associate with the "American Dream" the chance to leave their lower class and reach a higher class with fame and fortune.
As you can see the definitions vary a lot and dependent on everyone.
But one thing remains always the same you need to realise what your aims are and then make your dreams come true.
Many people think America is the key to a successful life with the chance to get rich easily and live a luxurious life. but the secret of such success is hard work.
You have to make sacrifices in your life to reach your dreams.
It's not as easy as most people might think.
Of course the USA is a highly developed country with economic advantages and in comparison with a developing country or a country with strong bureaucracy you could have a better chance to make your dreams come true.
However these facts alone aren't a guarantee for your success and a fine life.
You only have a better outlook for a better future.
Today living the American Dream is often wishful thinking, because the time have changed.
And there is one other negative aspect.
Most people only focus on realising their own dreams and think of anybody but themself.
As a result the USA has become a wasteful consumer society of lonely individuals.
In my opinion the main idea of the American Dream is to make your dreams come true which is all right and can become reality with hard work.

the American Dream or the "American Dream"

try to be consistent...

Duckduck

Delfino hat geschrieben:

For most Americans the American Dream provides the motivation or is the incentive for their actions and is used as the manual of life.
Everyone has his own definition of the "American Dream".
For some it's freedom, equality and the chance to live a full life,
and others associate with the "American Dream" the chance to leave their lower class and reach a higher class which might give them fame and fortune.
As you can see, the definitions vary a lot and are dependent on the relative person.
But one thing always remains the same, you need to realise what your aims are and then make your dreams come true.
Many people think America is the key to a successful life with the chance to get rich easily and live a luxurious life. But the secret of such success is hard work.
You have to make sacrifices in your life to reach your dreams.
It's not as easy as most people might think.
Of course, the USA is a highly developed country with economic advantages and, compared with a developing country or a country with strong bureaucracy, you probably have a better chance to make your dreams come true.
However, these facts alone aren't a guarantee for your success and a fine life.
You only have a better outlook for a better future.
Today, living the American Dream is often wishful thinking, because ~~the~~ times have changed.
And there is one other negative aspect.
Most people only focus on realising their own dreams and don't think of anybody but themselves.
As a result, the USA has become a wasteful consumer society of lonely individuals (Uijuijui... vielleicht ein kleines bisschen auf der harten Seite, diese Einschätzung...?!)
In my opinion, the main idea of the American Dream is to make your dreams come true which is all right and can become reality by / through hard work.

the American Dream or the "American Dream"

try to be consistent...

Freundliche Grüße von
Duckduck

**Deagle**

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