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[Witobia]

Mein Thema ist Big Ben
Unten steht es in Deutsch und ich habe es oben übersetzt in Englisch.
Würde michüber eine Korektur freuen.
Danke!!

Big Ben

English
1. Big Ben is one of the most famous landmarks of London.
2. The tower has 5 bells.
3. Big Ben is the largest bell.
4. Big Ben is the bell and not the whole tower.
5. Today we say the whole tower is Big Ben.
6. Her weight is 13, 5 tons.
7. The tower has 4 dials.
8. A clock face has a diameter of 7 Centimeters.
9. The minute hand has a length of 4, 3 meters and the hour hand is 2, 7 meters long.
10. This makes it the second largest clock from Britain.
11. The clock is celebrating its 150th Birthday in May 2009.
12. In the tower is already the second bell.

History

1856
In London, the first bell by Whitechapel Bell Foundry has been poured.
Whitechapel Bell Foundry is a bell foundry.
The first bell weighed 17 tons and not 14 tons.
That was a huge mistake.
The bell was broken, because the hammer and the bell were too heavy.

1857
Then the consequence:
She is broken, because the hammer and the bell were too heavy.
The bell had a 2-meter-long crack.
She was melted down again.

1858
The bell was cast for the second time and installed in the tower.
The clock was on 31 May 1859 set in motion.

1859
But she got back a crack.
The bell was rotated so that the hammer could not strike the crack.
The weight of the hammer has been reduced.




The origin of the name Big Ben is not clearly proved.
There are two main theories:

First theory:
After Sir Benjamin Hall, the First Commissioner of Works at the time of installation of the bell

Second theory:
After Ben Caunt, a boxer
He had his last fight in 1857.



Deutsch
1. Big Ben ist eines der berühmtesten Wahrzeichen von London.
2. Der Turm hat 5 Glocken.
3. Big Ben ist die größte Glocke.
4. Ihr Gewicht beträgt 13,5 Tonnen.
5. Big Ben ist die Glocke und nicht der ganze Turm.
6. Heute sagen wir der ganze Turm ist Big Ben.
7. Der Turm hat 4 Zifferblätter.
8. Ein Zifferblatt hat einen Durchmesser von 7 Zentimetern.
9. Der Minutenzeiger hat eine Länge von 4,3 Metern und der Stundenzeiger ist 2,74 Meter lang.
10. Damit ist sie die zweitgrößte Uhr von Großbritannien.
11. Die Uhr feiert seinen 150. Geburtstag im Mai 2009.
12. Im Turm ist bereits die zweite Glocke.


Geschichte

1856
In London wurde die erste Glocke von Whitechapel Glocken Gießerei gegossen.
Whitechapel Bell Foundry ist eine Glockengießerei.
Die erste Glocke wog 17 Tonnen und keine 14 Tonnen.
Das war ein riesen Fehler.

1857
Dann die Folge:
Sie ist gebrochen, weil der Hammer und die Glocke zu schwer waren.
Die Glocke hatte einen 2 Meter langen Riss.
Sie wurde wieder eingeschmolzen.

1858
Die Glocke wurde gegossen zum zweiten Mal und im Turm installiert.
Die Uhr wurde am 31. Mai 1859 in Gang gesetzt.

1859
Aber sie bekam wieder einen Riss.
Die Glocke wurde so gedreht, dass der Hammer nicht den Riss treffen konnte.
Das Gewicht des Hammers wurde verringert.

Der Ursprung des Namens Big Ben ist nicht eindeutig bewiesen.
Es gibt zwei Theorien:

Erste Theorie:
Nach Sir Benjamin Hall, dem First Commissioner of Works zum Zeitpunkt der Installation der Glocke

Zweite Theorie:
Nachdem Ben Caunt, ein Boxer
Er hatte seinen letzten Kampf im Jahr 1857.

[Duckduck]

Mein Thema ist Big Ben
Unten steht es in Deutsch und ich habe es oben übersetzt in Englisch.
Würde mich über eine Korrektur freuen.
Danke!!

Big Ben

English
1. Big Ben is one of the most famous landmarks of London.
2. The tower has 5 bells.
3. Big Ben is the largest bell.
4. Its weight is 13.5 tons.
5. Originally, "Big Ben" was the name of the bell and not of the whole tower.
6. But today we call the whole tower is Big Ben.
7. The tower has 4 dials.
8. Every clock face has a diameter of 7 Centimetres.
9. The minute hand has a length of 4.3 metres and the hour hand is 2.7 metres long.
10. This makes it the second largest clock of Great Britain.
11. The clock celebrated its 150th birthday in May 2009.
12. In the tower is already the second bell. (The bell in the tower is not the original one anymore but a second one.)

History

1856
In London, the first bell was cast by the Whitechapel Bell Foundry.
Whitechapel Bell Foundry is a bell foundry.
The first bell weighed 17 tons and not 14 tons. (Wiegt sie nicht 13.5 t? s.o.)
That was a huge mistake.

1857
Then the consequence:
The bell cracked because the clapper and the bell were too heavy.
The crack in the bell was 2 metres long.
It was melted down again.

1858
The bell was cast for the second time and installed in the tower.
The clock was set in motion on 31 May, 1859.

1859
But it sustained another crack.
The bell was rotated so that the clapper would not strike the crack.
On top of that, the weight of the clapper was reduced.


The origin of the name "Big Ben" is not quite clear.
There are two main theories:

First theory:
Named after Sir Benjamin Hall, the First Commissioner of Works at the time of the installation of the bell.

Second theory:
Named after Ben Caunt, a boxer.
He had his last fight in 1857.

Prima!
Ich habe die Schreibweise "meter" in "metre" geändert, weil sie BrE ist. Wäre aber nicht falsch andersrum.

Good luck says
Duckduck

[Witobia]

Das ist meine Vollständige Präsentation. Ich würde mich über Korrekturen freuen.

Big Ben

Introduction (Who is Big Ben?)
Big Ben is one of the most famous landmarks of London.
The clock tower stands at the Palace of Westminster in London.
The tower has 5 bells.
Big Ben is the largest bell.
Originally, "Big Ben" was the name of the bell and not of the whole tower.
But today we call the whole tower Big Ben.

Origin of name
The origin of the name "Big Ben" is not quite clear.
There are two main theories:

First theory:
Named after Sir Benjamin Hall, the First Commissioner of Works at the time of the installation of the bell.

Second theory:
Named after Ben Caunt, a boxer.
He had his last fight in 1857.

General Information
The weight of the bell is 13.5 tons.
The clock tower has a height of 96.3 meters.
The first 61 meters of the tower are made of brick with a limestone facade.
The head is cast iron.
The tower has 4 dials.
Every clock face has a diameter of 7 metres.
The minute hand has a length of 4.3 metres and the hour hand is 2.7 metres long.
The clock has a pendulum of 3.9 meters in length with a total weight of 300 kg.
This makes it the second largest clock of Great Britain.
In the tower is a prison that was used last in 1880.
The clock celebrated its 150th birthday in May 2009.
In the tower is already the second bell.

History
1856 In London the first bell was cast by the Whitechapel Bell Foundry.
Whitechapel Bell Foundry is a bell foundry.
The first bell weighed 17 tons and not 13.5 tons.
That was a huge mistake.

1857 Then the consequence:
The bell was cracked because the clapper and the bell were too heavy.
The crack in the bell was 2 metres long.

1858 It was melted down again.
The bell was cast for the second time and installed in the tower.

1859 The clock was set in motion on 31 May, 1859.
But it sustained another crack.
The bell was rotated so that the clapper would not strike the crack.
On top of that, the weight of the clapper was reduced.

I chose the topic because I was interested and wanted to know more.
I thank for your Attention.

[Keswick]

Das ist meine vollständige Präsentation. Ich würde mich über Korrekturen freuen.

Big Ben

Introduction (Who is Big Ben?)
Big Ben is one of the most famous landmarks of London.
The clock tower stands at the Palace of Westminster in London.
The tower has 5 bells.
Big Ben is the largest bell.
Originally, "Big Ben" was the name of the bell and not of the whole tower.
But today we call the whole tower Big Ben.

Origin of name
The origin of the name "Big Ben" is not quite clear.
There are two main theories:

First theory:
Named after Sir Benjamin Hall, the First Commissioner of Works at the time of the installation of the bell.

Second theory:
Named after Ben Caunt, a boxer.
He had his last fight in 1857.

General Information
The weight of the bell is 13.5 tons.
The clock tower has a height of 96.3 meters.
The first 61 meters of the tower are made of brick with a limestone facade.
The head is cast iron.
The tower has 4 dials.
Every clock face has a diameter of 7 metres.
The minute hand has a length of 4.3 metres and the hour hand is 2.7 metres long.
The clock has a pendulum of 3.9 meters in length with a total weight of 300 kg.
This makes it the second largest clock of Great Britain.
In the tower is a prison that was used last in 1880.
The clock celebrated its 150th birthday in May 2009.
There is already the second bell in the tower.

History
1856 In London the first bell was cast by the Whitechapel Bell Foundry.
Whitechapel Bell Foundry is a bell foundry.
The first bell weighed 17 tons and not 13.5 tons.
That was a huge mistake.

1857 Then the consequence:
The bell was cracked because the clapper and the bell were too heavy.
The crack in the bell was 2 metres long.

1858 It was melted down again.
The bell was cast for the second time and installed in the tower.

1859 The clock was set in motion on 31 May, 1859.
But It sustained another crack.
The bell was rotated so that the clapper would not strike the crack.
On top of that, the weight of the clapper was reduced.

I chose the topic because I was interested in Big Ben and wanted to know more about it.
I thank for your attention.

[Witobia]

Wie kann man im Englischen

It sustained another crack.

einfacher schreiben?

[Duckduck]

Hi again ,

nun das geht wirklich einfacher (was hat mich da nur geritten...)

It got another crack.

Grüße
Duckduck

[Witobia]

My topic for the presentation is Big Ben.
I chose the topic because I was interested in Big Ben and wanted to know more about it.
My presentation is structured in the 5 major points:
(Who is Big Ben?, Origin of the name Big Ben, General Information and History about the bell)
I'm playing a radio play by the bell at the end.

I come to the first point: Who is Big Ben?

I come to the second point: Origin of the name Big Ben

General information about the bell tower is my next point.

My last point is the History about the bell.

Now you hear Big Ben.

My presentation is finished.
I thank for your attention.

[Duckduck]

The topic of my presentation is "Big Ben".
I chose it because I was interested in "Big Ben" and wanted to know more about it.
My presentation is structured in the following 5 major parts:
(What is "Big Ben"?,
Origin of the Name "Big Ben",
General Information and
History of the Bell) (Wenn Du Überschriften schreibst, bitte treffe eine Entscheidung, ob Du groß oder klein schreiben willst, nicht mischen!)
And at the end of my presentation I would like you to listen to a recording of "Big Ben".

I come to the first point: Who is Big Ben? ODER
Now I would like to start my presentation with the answer to the question "What is "Big Ben".

I come to the second point: Origin of the name Big Ben ODER
This leads me to the second part of my presentation: Origin of the Name "Big Ben".

ODER Now I would like to give you some general information about the bell tower.

ODER The last part of my presentation deals with the history of the bell.

ODER Finally I would like you all to listen to a recording of this very famous bell called "Big Ben".

ODER This is the end of my presentation. Thank you very much for your kind attention.

Ein prima Vortrag wird das, da bin ich sicher. Du hast Dir viel Arbeit gemacht. Vielleicht machen meine Vorschläge die ganze Sache noch etwas runder.

Good luck says
Duckduck

[Witobia]

Das müsste ich an die Tafel bringen:

Big Ben

1. What is "Big Ben"?
2. Origin of the Name "Big Ben"
3. General Information
4. History of the Bell
5. Recording of "Big Ben”

Vocabulary

theory/ theories - Theorie/ Theorien
brick - Ziegelstein
limestone facade - Kalksteinfassade
cast iron -Gusseisen
dials - Zifferblätter
prison - Gefängnis
bell foundry - Glockengießerei
cast - gegossen
melted down - zusammengeschmolzen
clapper - Klöppel



Duckduck ich bedank mich bei Dir!!!
Ohne deine Hilfe wäre ich nicht soweit gekommen.

[Duckduck]

Hi Witobia, ich wünsche Dir ganz viel Glück und bin sicher, dass es bestens klappen wird.
Jetzt, wo Du erwähnt hat, dass Du die Überschriften an die Tafel schreiben wirst, überlege vielleicht nochmal, ob Du dann nicht lieber nur das erste Wort groß schreibst. Nicht, dass Dein Lehrer glaubt, Du kenntest Dich mit der Kleinschreibung im Englischen nicht aus. Großschreibung ist bei Überschriften zwar möglich, könnte aber missverstanden werden.

Good luck says
Duckduck

[Witobia]

Das ist mein letzter Beitrag. Ich muss mein Vortrag am Montag halten und übe schon fleißig^^
Das ist meine komplette Präsentation dank Duckduck!
Würde mich über noch einmal Korrekturlesen freuen.

The topic of my presentation is "Big Ben".
I chose it because I was interested in "Big Ben" and wanted to know more about it.
My presentation is structured in the following 5 major parts: …
And at the end of my presentation I would like you to listen to a recording of "Big Ben".

Now I would like to start my presentation with the answer to the question "What is "Big Ben".
Big Ben is one of the most famous landmarks of London.
The clock tower of Big Ben stands at the Palace of Westminster.
The tower has 5 bells.
Big Ben is the largest bell.
Normally, "Big Ben" was the name of the bell and not of the whole tower.
But today we call the whole tower Big Ben.

This leads me to the second part of my presentation: Origin of the Name "Big Ben".
The origin of the name "Big Ben" is not quite clear.
There are two main theories:
First theory:
Named after Sir Benjamin Hall, the First Commissioner of Works at the time of the installation of the bell.
Second theory:
Named after Ben Caunt, It’s a boxer.
He had his last fight in 1857.

Now I would like to give you some general information about the clock tower.
The weight of the bell is 13.5 tons.
The clock tower has a height of 96 meters.
The first 61 meters of the tower are made of brick with a limestone facade.
The head is cast iron.
The tower has 4 dials.
Every clock face has a diameter of 7 metres.
The minute hand has a length of 4 metres and the hour hand is 3 metres long.
The clock has a pendulum of 4 meters in length with a total weight of 300 kg.
This makes it the second largest clock of Great Britain.
In the tower is a prison that was used last in 1880.
The clock is now 150 years old.
There is already the second bell in the tower.

The last part of my presentation deals with the history of the bell.
In London the first bell was cast by the Whitechapel Bell Foundry in 1856.
Whitechapel Bell Foundry is a bell foundry.
The first bell weighed 17 tons and not 13.5 tons.
That was a huge mistake.
Then the consequence:
The bell was cracked because the clapper and the bell were too heavy.
The crack in the bell was 2 metres long.
It was melted down again.
The bell was cast for the second time and installed in the tower.
The clock was set in motion in1859.
It got another crack.
The bell was rotated so that the clapper would not strike the crack.
On top of that, the weight of the clapper was reduced.

Finally I would like you all to listen to a recording of this very famous bell called "Big Ben".

This is the end of my presentation.
Are there any questions?
Everyone still gets a handout from me.
Thank you very much for your kind attention.

[Duckduck]

Das ist mein letzter Beitrag. Ich muss mein Vortrag am Montag halten und übe schon fleißig^^
Das ist meine komplette Präsentation dank Duckduck!
Würde mich über noch einmal Korrekturlesen freuen.

The topic of my presentation is "Big Ben".
I chose it because I was interested in "Big Ben" and wanted to know more about it.
My presentation is structured in the following 4 major parts: … (Wenn Du das Zuhören extra ankündigst, sind es nur 4 Hauptpunkte)
And at the end of my presentation I would like you to listen to a recording of "Big Ben".

Now I would like to start my presentation with the answer to the question "What is "Big Ben".
Big Ben is one of the most famous landmarks of London.
The clock tower of Big Ben stands at the Palace of Westminster.
The tower has 5 bells.
Big Ben is the largest bell.
Originally, "Big Ben" was the name of the bell and not of the whole tower.
But today we call the whole tower "Big Ben".

This leads me to the second part of my presentation: Origin of the name "Big Ben".
The origin of the name "Big Ben" is not quite clear.
There are two main theories:
First theory:
Named after Sir Benjamin Hall, the First Commissioner of Works at the time of the installation of the bell.
Second theory:
Named after Ben Caunt, who was a boxer.
He had his last fight in 1857.

Now I would like to give you some general information about the clock tower.
The weight of the bell is 13.5 tons. (Das sprichst Du dann "thirteen point 5 tons", wusstest Du schon, ne?)
The clock tower has a height of 96 meters.
The first 61 meters of the tower are made of brick with a limestone facade.
The head is made of cast iron.
The tower has 4 dials.
Every clock face has a diameter of 7 metres. (Schreibweise "metres" = britisch, "meters" = amerikanisch, egal wie, mach's aber einheitlich!)
The minute hand has a length of 4 metres and the hour hand is 3 metres long.
The clock has a pendulum of 4 meters in length with a total weight of 300 kilos.
This makes it the second largest clock of Great Britain.
Inside the tower is a prison that was used until 1880.
The clock is 150 years old now.
There is already the second bell in the tower.

The last part of my presentation deals with the history of the bell.
The first bell was cast by the Whitechapel Bell Foundry of London in 1856.
Whitechapel Bell Foundry is a bell foundry.
The first bell weighed 17 tons and not 13.5 tons.
That was a huge mistake and led to a serious consequence ( "led" ist Past Tense von "lead" = "leiten, führen":
The bell was cracked because the clapper and the bell were too heavy.
The crack in the bell was 2 metres long.
It was melted down again.
The bell was cast for the second time and installed in the tower.
The clock was set in motion in 1859.
It got another crack.
The bell was rotated so that the clapper would not strike the crack.
On top of that, the weight of the clapper was reduced.

Finally I would like you all to listen to a recording of this very famous bell called "Big Ben".

This is the end of my presentation.
Are there any questions?
I have a handout here for everyone.
Thank you very much for your kind attention.

Well, well, well: extremely well done.
Du merkst, je öfter man drüberguckt, desto mehr neue Ideen kommen einem. So finde ich es toll und drücke fest die Daumen.

Good luck says
Duckduck

[Witobia]

Habe eine gute 2 bekommen!! Danke noch einmal für einmal für deine Hilfe!!

[Duckduck]

Yippi!!!!
Well done, Witobia!!!

Duckduck