Telefonskript korrekturlesen lassen

[nacbas]

Hallo,
ich bin neu im Forum und ich hoffe ihr könnt mir weiter helfen. Und zwar muss ich für den Englischunterricht ein Telefonskript schreiben. Ich hoffe einer von euch kann das Telefonskript korrekturlesen. Vielen Dank im Voraus!

Mr. X: Boss Mobile, Mr. X speaking, how can I help you?
Mr.Y: Hello Mr.X this is Mr. Y from GL Mobile. We received your enquiry and we would like to make a offer.
Mr.X: Great! What can you offer us?
Mr.Y: We can offer a 5% quantity discount for orders over 8,000 units. We can also offer a 2% cash discount for payments within 10 days.
Mr.X: Sounds good! What are your terms of payment?
Mr.Y: We prefer payments by bank transfer. The payment should be made within 30 days.
Mr.X: Okay. Could you please tell me again from which amount the quantity discount is valid?
Mr.Y: The quantity discount is valid for orders over 8,000 units.
Mr.X: Great! We would like to order 8,000 units.
Mr.Y: Nice to hear that. We send immedialtely a offer with all details we discussed. Your contact details are known to me.
Mr.X: Thank you for calling and goodbye
Mr.Y: Thank you, you too bye.

[Keswick]

Hallo,
ich bin neu im Forum und ich hoffe ihr könnt mir weiter helfen. Und zwar muss ich für den Englischunterricht ein Telefonskript schreiben. Ich hoffe einer von euch kann das Telefonskript korrekturlesen. Vielen Dank im Voraus!

Mr X: Boss Mobile, Mr X speaking, how can I help you?
Mr Y: Hello Mr X this is Mr Y from GL Mobile. We received your enquiry and we would like to make an offer.
Mr X: Great! What can you offer us?
Mr Y: We can offer a 5% quantity discount for orders over 8,000 units. We can also offer a 2% cash discount for payments within 10 days.
Mr X: Sounds good! What are your terms of payment?
Mr Y: We prefer payments via bank transfer. The payment should be made within 30 days.
Mr X: Okay. Could you please tell me again from which amount the quantity discount is valid?
Mr Y: The quantity discount is valid for orders over 8,000 units.
Mr X: Great! We would like to order 8,000 units.
Mr Y: Nice to hear that. We send you an offer with all details we discussed immediately. Your contact details are known to me.
Mr X: Thank you for calling and goodbye
Mr Y: Thank you, you too, bye.

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