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[Steff_4]

Hallo

eine kurze Korrektur wäre schön .

My Girlfriend and I were in Sweden two years ago. It was good time with a lof of great experiences. We visited many interesting cities there. We saw a building that was built on the top of a mountain. It was very weird to see. We met some people who were very friendly. During my studies I absolved a semester abroad in London. I can say it`s  more expensive than in Germany. The weather was neither cold nor warm. It was a mix between sun and clouds. It was very important to give myself the change to got used to my new lifestyle.  But it was also a great time.

[tiorthan]

Hallo

eine kurze Korrektur wäre schön .

My Girlfriend and I were in Sweden two years ago. It was good time with a lof of great experiences. We visited many interesting cities there. We saw a building that was built on the top of a mountain. It was very weird to see. We met some people who were very friendly. During my studies I completed₁ a semester abroad in London. I can say it`s  more expensive than in Germany. The weather was neither cold nor warm. It was a mix between sun and clouds. It was very important to give myself the  chance₂ to get used to my new lifestyle.  But it was also a great time.

1 - False friend! "Absolve" ist nicht absolvieren (obwohl beide Wörter den gleichen historischen Hintergrund haben) sondern es hat ddn Sinn "die Absolution erteilen" oder "freisprechen" und ähnliche.

2 - Ich bin mir nicht ganz sicher, ob du das meintest.

[Steff_4]

Hallo Tiorthan,
danke für die Verbesserung. Jap ich meinte das. Das war nur ein Rechtschreibfehler.

[Duckduck]

Hallo

eine kurze Korrektur wäre schön .  Huhu, doch noch einige kleine Überseherle gefunden...

My girlfriend and I were in Sweden two years ago. It was/We had a good time with a lot of great experiences. We visited many interesting cities there. We saw a building that was built on the top of a mountain. It was very weird (to see). We met some people who were very friendly. During my studies I  completed₁ a semester (abroad) in London. I can say living there is  more expensive than in Germany. The weather was neither cold nor warm. It was a mix between sun and clouds. It was very important to give myself the chance₂ to get used to my new lifestyle.  But it was also a great time.

1 - False friend! "Absolve" ist nicht absolvieren (obwohl beide Wörter den gleichen historischen Hintergrund haben) sondern es hat ddn Sinn "die Absolution erteilen" oder "freisprechen" und ähnliche.

2 - Ich bin mir nicht ganz sicher, ob du das meintest.

Grüße
Duckduck