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Marny2000
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DRINGEND!! Bitte um Korrektur von Vokabelgebrauch, stil und Form des Textes. Brauche diesen für mein Englisch Referat

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The nuclear disaster of Chernobyl

-Catastrophic accident at the Chernobyl nuclear power plant on 26. April 1986 in Block 4-

26. April 1986 in the nuclear power plant of Chernobyl, the worst accident in the history of nuclear energy. Two explosions destroyed one of the four reactor blocks and threw radioactive Material into the atmosphere, which large parts of Russia, Belarus and the Ukraine contaminated.

The clouds with the radioactive fallout spread first about wide parts of Europe and, finally, about the whole northern hemisphere. Changing air currents did them first to Scandinavia, then over Poland, Czechia, Austria, South Germany and Northern Italy. The third cloud reached the Balkans, Greece and Turkey. Completely for the human use had to be given up approx. 6400 km ² in agricultural land and woodlands which were lain near the power station and were loaded accordingly very high. All together about 218,000 square kilometers were loaded with more than 37,000 Becquerel (37 kBq) 137Cs per square meter radioactively. More than 70 percent of these areas lie in Russia, the Ukraine and Byelorussia.                              



One tastes, smells, feels and does not see them. But the rays can change directly certain cell components or ionize indirectly the water in the cell – besides, there originate the free radicals which damage then the fabric. The radiation can break open the DNA chains and change the hereditary code. Ray protection experts make a distinction between deterministic and stochastischen ray damages. With the first one symptom are meant, the affected person immediately after a ray exposition show. Visible results can be a feeling of sickness, combustion-like Hautrötungen, dizziness and loss of hair. In the worst case a person who has got so much radiation dies. The stronger he is contaminated, the earlier the results appear.

According to WHO and IAEA (2006) just 50 people died as a result of acute ray illness. In three strongest affected countries is to be calculated because of the raised ray exposition on about 9000 additional deadly cancer and leukemia illnesses. Beside cancer, the social and psychic traumas are probably the biggest problems for the population in the areas around Chernobyl. Some scientists hold these psychic results for the biggest health problem as a result of the accident. The average life expectancy has clearly sunk. With illnesses of the ocular lenses (e.g., to the cataract) a connection with radioactive load is likely. In Russia, a significantly higher risk was ascertained in a big study in emergency-application forces by Chernobyl for deadly heart circulation illnesses. In several studies interferences of the cellular and humoralen immune system were found.

Still today, Above all, the mushrooms are contaminated in parts of Bavaria and Austria very radioactively. Wild boars eat the mushrooms what leads to the fact that the meat of the shot animals cannot be used. To protect the consumer, has fixed the EU Cäsium-Höchstwerte for food. The Bavarian association of hunting clubs (BJV) makes sure according to own information with his Bavarian-far 111 measuring stations that only controlled game is sold. Beside this first protective mechanism there is for the consumer still a second, namely the food quality control.

Chernobyl dates back 30 years, but the fear has remained. Now the Federal Government wants to allow to examine possible effects of an accident in the Belgian nuclear power station Tihange 2 for the region close to the border in Germany. then  on basis of these data should carry out the Federal Office for ray protection own calculations. Besides, it is about the question whether the plannings are sufficient for emergency measures and the evacuation after a heavy atomic power station accident. With certain weather conditions is to be calculated on a situation like in the 20-kilometre-locking zone all around the Japanese nuclear power station Fukushima.The results should be discussed with Belgium. However, also in Cattenom concerns are given, because in the nuclear power plant there were already several fires.
 




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Re: DRINGEND!! Bitte um Korrektur von Vokabelgebrauch, stil und Form des Textes. Brauche diesen für mein Englisch Refera

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Ich habe angefangen deinen Text zu korrigieren, und mich dann dagegen entschieden, da dein Text komplette Textteile erhaelt, die du aus diesem Text der Zeit genommen und dann in Google Translate uebersetzt hast. Ich verstehe natuerlich, dass man sich fuer ein Referat Quellen sucht und diese nutzt, aber einen bereits vorhandenen Text eines Authors in Englisch ziemlich identisch zu uebernehmen ist leider keine Eigeninitiative, die wir hier im Forum schon erwarten.
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