Kleiner Aufsatz über Tiere und Sport

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Davidvo
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Kleiner Aufsatz über Tiere und Sport

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Hallo,
ich würde aktuell gerne wieder meine eingerosteten englisch Kenntnisse auffrischen. Dazu will ich in den nächsten paar Monaten einige essays verfassen. Thema des ersten essays "Sports involving animals should be banned".
All over the world argue people whether sports involving animals should be banned. Carried to an extreme this would mean that sports like horserace or polo will prohibited.
None denies the fact that many animals will be torture for sports, but although thousands of people like and visit sports events with animals. The reason is that is an old tradition to use animals for sports. Another significant point is that sports with animals are very spectacular. One could argue that other sports without animals are also spectacular, but for many people is it more stunning to see a horserace or a polo game than a NASCAR race.
Although it must be admitted that horseraces or other sports with animals are very stunning there is no denying the fact that many sports with animals are animal cruelty. For instance many racehorses die in consequence of stress. Furthermore we must take into account that it is against the nature to use animals in sports. Additionally every animal is a creature and it is reprehensible to use an animal for sports competition and to make money.
Weighing the pros and cons, I come to the conclusion that sports involving animals should be banned. Personally, I think there are many stunning sports without animals. Therefore it is not necessary to torture animals for sports.
 Ich würde mich sehr über eine Korrektur freuen.
Herzlichen Dank!

Liebe Grüße
David
 
 




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