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[GastRominI]

Guten Morgen,
ich bin gerade an etwas dran und bin mir unsicher bei folgende Sätze:
-I'am writing something for the school. I'am from germany and need help. Do you understand this: If you are Helper rank 1, you are available to join our Staff Team as Trial Moderator! (Apply here: domain)
- If you are very active and falls positively then we will ask you if you are interested to join the helper team.

Danke im Voraus!

[GastRominI]

Okey, ich hab es.

MfG
DrSkiio

[Keswick]

Guten Morgen,

ich bin gerade an etwas dran und bin mir unsicher bei folgende Sätze:

-I am writing something for the school. I am from Germany and need some help. Do you understand this: If you are at Helper rank 1, you have the opportunity to join our staff team as trial moderator! (Apply here: domain)

- If you are very active and act in a positive manner, then we might ask you if you are interested in joining the helper team.

Danke im Voraus!

Hallo,

Ich habe mir deine Saetze dennoch noch einmal angesehen.

Gruss
Keswick