Hello everybody,
my name is Dennis , i am 16 years old and from Germany (Rheinland-Pfalz) . Next year i am in the 11th class and i am trying to prepare myself for my Abitur. I've never been in England or America and in my opinion i am not very good at English, but i am trying my best to get better and speak it fluently . Later I want to study Psychology , so I need it for this , but i also think it's a very beautiful language. I hope you can help me a bit by learning it .
I like to read books, do sports, watch films and to sleep.
Dennis
Hey i am from Germany
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Re: Hey i am from Germany
Hi Dennis.IDennis- hat geschrieben:Hello everybody!
My name is Dennis. I'm 16 years old and from Germany (Rheinland-Pfalz). Next year, I am going to be in the 11th class and I am trying to prepare myself for my Abitur. I've never been in England or America and in my opinion I am not very good in English, but I try to get better in speaking fluently. Later I want to study psychology, so I need English for this, but I also think English is a very beautiful language. I hope you can help me a bit by learning it .
I like to read books, doing sports, watching films and sleeping.
Dennis
I tried to correct your text. Maybe a full skilled English speaker can correct it again, if something is wrong.
Best regards,
Azzurri
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Re: Hey i am from Germany
Hi Dennis,Azzurri hat geschrieben:Hi Dennis.IDennis- hat geschrieben:Hello everybody!
My name is Dennis. I'm 16 years old and from Germany (Rheinland-Pfalz). Next year, I am going to be in grade 11 and I am trying to prepare myself for my A-levels. I've never been to England or America and in my opinion I am not very good in English, but I try to get better in speaking fluently. Later I want to study psychology, and I need English for this, but I also think English is a very beautiful language. I hope you can help me a bit with learning it .
I like to read books, doing sports, watching films and sleeping.
Dennis
I tried to correct your text. Maybe a full skilled English speaker can correct it again, if something is wrong.
Best regards,
Azzurri
Try to shorten your sentences a bit. This prevents mistakes and comes closer to actual English speakers who normally use shorter but more sentences
Good luck with your A-levels !
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