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sunsnacks
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einleitung korrektur bitte :)

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kann mir diesen text korrektieren bitte danke :)

Over the course of “The prohibition of torture in international law - the concept of prevention“ I was able to gain an insight into the validity and the extent of the prohibition of torture in international law on the basis of the universal and regional legal bases and its interpretation through the courts and State practice. Especially the reports of the CPT (European Committee for the Prevention of Torture) were in my opinion deeply interesting and on the other hand terrifying. It’s alarming which practices and standards are still in use all over Europe.
The 21st General Report on the CPT’s Activities (2010-2011) gains an almost forgotten aspect of torture centre stage: solitary confinement. This report clarifies how present this issue still is. All over the world prisoners are held alone in their cell for up to 24 hours a day, and are only allowed to leave it, if at all, for an hour or so of outdoor exercise.
In this diploma thesis the difficulty of solitary confinement shall be examined carefully. The focus is on the international and regional legal framework and its enforcement mechanism. Furthermore the monitoring bodies and its procedures shall be analyzed in this paper. This diploma thesis shall pose which provisions and mechanisms are binding and where they are binding respectively where they are not.
The structure of the diploma thesis in the following way: Chapter One addresses issues of definition, provides the types of solitary confinement and the decisions of placement in solitary confinement. Furthermore it approaches the procedures and safeguards of the treatment of prisoners. Chapter Two examines the proven health effects of prisoners in segregation, both physical and psychological, and tries to understand what makes solitary confinement damaging. Chapter Three sets the international legal and regulatory framework as well as the monitoring bodies and procedures out. Chapter Four analyzes the regional legal and regulatory framework as well as the monitoring bodies and procedures. This chapter is focused on Europe. Chapter Five examines solitary confinement in Austria. The last chapter, Chapter Six recaps some of the main issues and themes discussed throughout the diploma thesis.




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Re: einleitung korrektur bitte :)

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keiner? wäre wirklich super wenn mir jemand helfen könnte danke

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